I Love - Falling Without Expectations

I love falling without expectations,
seeing yes in the garden of your eyes.
Being blinded
as if the earth moved
when we are sharing
the same sweet skies.

I love feeling as if I have been struck
clear to my soul.
When I run headlong into your arms and find
the half of me that is,
only with you, becomes whole.

I love the moments when I can sit very still
and get lost in the light of you.
The brilliancy of your heart
outshines any diamond
in expressions of love’s hue.

I love how you roll into the air
as a whispered voice,
from lips confessing love reigns
inside your heart.
The sound takes me places
where my heart leaps to start.

I love waiting to relive the treasure
of velvet minutes I hold of you
in my memory.
They are the sweetest interruptions
and I will embrace them
forever, lovingly.

Reviews

[EMF]

One problem as I'm reading this. Just one. There's stuff connected to writers cafe on the page, and I have to sully the page with my view. So very beautiful Neva. So heart meltingly beautiful. I can't get this silly smile off my face. I'm riding on an infinity loop of joy.

[Draven]

Lol, I teared up. That is so sweet and passionate and beautiful.

[unknown]

Beautiful!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A true thought leaps from your mind to the page, to the screen, a great piece, well done, good read.

[Bridgid Persephone Newm..]

You nailed it Neva! A masterpiece!

[Kelly Scheppers]

"I love the moments when I can sit very still
and get lost in the light of you.
The brilliancy of your heart
outshines any diamond
in expressions of love’s hue."

...I adore this verse! To "outshine any diamond" is a lovely descriptive. Beautiful poetry, Neva!


My best,
Kelly

[Zachary_James]

One Word, amazing

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem of love. I like the description and the feel of the words. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Arabdha]

And I love how each line of yours here sets forth the chain of priceless,profound,lovely moments ! I loved it :)

[KAREN]

So beautiful, it leaves me in awe.
100/100

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

I love this poem, so beautifully written! Each stanza breath-taking!
100/100