Until Honesty Went Down On Its Knees

The smallest pieces of life contain laws written in stone
for the world to lose interest in kind.
They can be easily read in the dark then left to remain
as still as a man
who is more than just a bit color-blind.

Sometimes I sit within varied distances from it all,
breaking into my life,
when all I want to do is advise
the sun to shine.
Because I know, a smile can make a break
flourish into the clearing
we can only hope to find.

I realize how fantastically black the sky can be
and how its state
saves all the words of love
and their simplicity.
Secrets granted from them sometimes say
that life is not fair
when it pierces the souls’ of you and me.

Bound inside a myriad of righteousness
we tried a million times
to offer up the friends of our needs.
Until honesty went down on its knees
seeking to live on the conviction it studies,
in order to continue to breathe.

I have pulled repeatedly from the prayers
I held deep inside mirrors,
in order once again to find my shining sun.
However, often, overturning truth
is a journey best remembered as a failure,
failing to reach out or help a single one.

Can all judgment be silent and still believed
when it comes in on the emotions
we sometimes bend into a shield?
Stranger in your sight is how they burn,
even when your body moves to erase the way
last night made you feel.

Sometimes I wonder if each page of life
that wanders sincerely into light,
finds the deepest waves of darkness
attempting to recreate streams of painful fire.
Is the light’s glory not held inside a sea of calm
you would swim to acquire?

Author's Note

*Artist Jia Lu

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is a real stunner. I felt a struggle to keep my eyes on the moral compass. The easier paths and their beautiful colors temped me, but your words give the strength to not run away from the pain. This is truly thought provoking work... with treasures hidden beneath the surface. Your emotions run deep. Every line is the bursting of a dam.

[Tom C]

Thank you. For me life butterflies and rainbows, airplane rides and kisses. Enjoy life.

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

For a odd reason, hearing this poem in my head sounded so epic! As usual, your poems never disappoint!

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

So much emotion bleeding from these lines, this is simply stunning!

[Arielle Ann]

you are one great artist !!! the whole flow seemed like a song...a beautiful free flow which you can listen to repeatedly....each line infused with the deepest insight...I understood most of it, but couldn't some of it...however I adored the sound of it! lovely!

[Birdman313]

really enjoyed the feeling your emotion runs deep

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This really is so vivid and clear, the message is so wonderful. Touch my soul in a deep special way. Beautifully written!
100/100

[Larry Dyson]

really like the feelings and metaphor in the last stanza..."Sometimes I wonder if each page of life
that wanders sincerely into light,
finds the deepest waves of darkness
attempting to recreate streams of painful fire.
Is the light’s glory not held inside a sea of calm
you would swim to acquire?
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[Poetic Beauty]

This is stunning the descriptions are clear. We need to take a little time to see those who may need a smile or a helping hand. We need to bring kindness back into our lives and try to spread it around. This is a piece that makes you think

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Beautifully written with stunning imagery