My Lips Fall upon Your Thoughts

My Lips Fall upon Your Thoughts

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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I walk delicately across your mind tying the strings of your heart to my own.

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If my lips appear to fall upon your thoughts,
that is where
they are supposed to be.
At night,
when your ears hear pages
of the faintest verse
whispering on your neck,
it is my way of telling you everything
will be alright,
go back to sleep,
it is just me.

If you feel the softest kiss in the morning
as if the sun
has filled the passageways
of your heart
with everything you miss.
The radiance you feel in these spaces
is not a dream
in which you have fallen,
nor random chance,
it is my way
of sending you bliss.

If your temperature rises in a delightful instant,
eternally warming your soul
with a drink
and leaving your heart glowing.
It is because it holds the promises
my heart placed long ago
in a chalice called my love
where you can drink
of a warmth overflowing.

I am always with you
even on those nights
that seem to never end.
I walk delicately across your mind
tying the strings of your heart
to my own.
You can hear my voice
when my lips fall upon your thoughts
whispering,
“I love you, My Heart,
I’m coming home.”

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
*Artist Michael Zancan

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This is a delicate deeply emotional piece. It reminds me of someone who has lost the love of their live. The love still lingers even though this person is no longer walking the plains of this earth but has moved on to greater horizons but still whispers in the ether to the one they love and always will.

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So powerful. Very inspiring. I am overwhelmed with the pristine beauty of the poem Thanks Neva

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a true and delicate love feast .. the words hum with reality and your phrasing really is amongst the best i've read in here for ages. Too many perfect lines to quote a favourite, Neva. Your poem really reaches inside me ..

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing artwork and words. The words were kind and filled with love and memory. A very nice ending for a outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well what do I say...... not sure, to many words I could say but all seem clique... so I will just say nothing..... but drink this in

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You have captured my mind and my heart Neva--just gorgeous writing

I walk delicately across your mind
tying the strings of your heart
to my own.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I was captivated by this beautiful write. I felt every word..xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Incredible words and imagery created by Ms Neva as has become the expected.
I could see my love saying these very thoughts to me as she is much like you.
Thanks for sharing this moment with us.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stunning.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hmmm ..coming home.. one wonders the reason for the season?

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I walk delicately across your mind wow that speaks loud and clear I like it your poems always touches the soul

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on December 8, 2011
Last Updated on December 9, 2011
Tags: love, heart, lips, soul, thoughts, home

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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