My Lips Fall upon Your Thoughts

My Lips Fall upon Your Thoughts

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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I walk delicately across your mind tying the strings of your heart to my own.

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If my lips appear to fall upon your thoughts,
that is where
they are supposed to be.
At night,
when your ears hear pages
of the faintest verse
whispering on your neck,
it is my way of telling you everything
will be alright,
go back to sleep,
it is just me.

If you feel the softest kiss in the morning
as if the sun
has filled the passageways
of your heart
with everything you miss.
The radiance you feel in these spaces
is not a dream
in which you have fallen,
nor random chance,
it is my way
of sending you bliss.

If your temperature rises in a delightful instant,
eternally warming your soul
with a drink
and leaving your heart glowing.
It is because it holds the promises
my heart placed long ago
in a chalice called my love
where you can drink
of a warmth overflowing.

I am always with you
even on those nights
that seem to never end.
I walk delicately across your mind
tying the strings of your heart
to my own.
You can hear my voice
when my lips fall upon your thoughts
whispering,
“I love you, My Heart,
I’m coming home.”

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
*Artist Michael Zancan

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This is a delicate deeply emotional piece. It reminds me of someone who has lost the love of their live. The love still lingers even though this person is no longer walking the plains of this earth but has moved on to greater horizons but still whispers in the ether to the one they love and always will.

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This is pure beauty written in emotional fashion! Love the title and picture, ties in so perfectly with your stunning words!

Favorite line:
I walk delicately across your mind
tying the string to your heart
to my own.

BEAUTIFUL!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Such sweet and warm thoughts as the one you yearn is not by your side...love if true and real can be felt, even distance nor time can take the loving feeling away.
Beautifully Penned Neva!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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simply put, you are a masterful writer when speaking of the heart..you gently embrace the feelings and gracefully pen the words so emotively..

Posted 12 Years Ago


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How deliciously warm and intimate this is! The tone is velvet, the mood serene, the emotions overwhelmingly real!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

simply amazing, you are so delicious....I adore your touch....so feeling...hello my friend.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The love that whispers closely or from a distance off of one's lips often brings peace to that special someome...beautiful poem!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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My gosh! This piece is breathtaking.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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A true written canvas of spoken, whispered narrated word, layered upon phrase of delicate, deep in the heart's soul of love - Love the title.

Wonderful!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Back again, for something good. Something real. Sheer perfection

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Added on December 8, 2011
Last Updated on December 9, 2011
Tags: love, heart, lips, soul, thoughts, home

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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