My Lips Fall upon Your Thoughts

My Lips Fall upon Your Thoughts

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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I walk delicately across your mind tying the strings of your heart to my own.

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If my lips appear to fall upon your thoughts,
that is where
they are supposed to be.
At night,
when your ears hear pages
of the faintest verse
whispering on your neck,
it is my way of telling you everything
will be alright,
go back to sleep,
it is just me.

If you feel the softest kiss in the morning
as if the sun
has filled the passageways
of your heart
with everything you miss.
The radiance you feel in these spaces
is not a dream
in which you have fallen,
nor random chance,
it is my way
of sending you bliss.

If your temperature rises in a delightful instant,
eternally warming your soul
with a drink
and leaving your heart glowing.
It is because it holds the promises
my heart placed long ago
in a chalice called my love
where you can drink
of a warmth overflowing.

I am always with you
even on those nights
that seem to never end.
I walk delicately across your mind
tying the strings of your heart
to my own.
You can hear my voice
when my lips fall upon your thoughts
whispering,
“I love you, My Heart,
I’m coming home.”

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
*Artist Michael Zancan

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This is a delicate deeply emotional piece. It reminds me of someone who has lost the love of their live. The love still lingers even though this person is no longer walking the plains of this earth but has moved on to greater horizons but still whispers in the ether to the one they love and always will.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Wonderfully written! Definitely comingg back to read more from you!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I only just stumbled upon your writing by chance but, this poem is incredible. You honestly have a gift, the words you use are so carefully chosen and incredibly beautiful. What a marvelous poem, well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

simply breath taking!!! that was just, just.... ooohhh Im in aaaww right now... speaks to me so loudly!
Neva you have such beautiful work!! this is def. going into my fav. pile!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daring, provocative. I like this one because I like references to chalices and love. Very good emotional piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This just seems to me to be an Anthem of all the poetry you have given to all of us this very trying year. I Thank God for having you grace my path.
You are "A shining light set upon a hill"

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awesome write. Love and grace abound in these words. Beautiful...!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. Not many pieces can strongly pull off the wanting and yearning of someone missing without being so obvious. This is beatifully penned emotional write. Nicely done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Sitting here holding myself, holding my breath, and putting my thoughts on pause to read yours. BEAUTIFUL!!!! Coming straight from your heart and soul. This is truely one of my top favorites. Not many poems can physically feel. 100/100 for me too.... actaully...100+/100
Please read my poem "Rekindle"

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

splendid images a warm words of thoughts and realizations.

Posted 12 Years Ago


So beautiful it takes my breath away. The whole poem is written to prefection!
100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 8, 2011
Last Updated on December 9, 2011
Tags: love, heart, lips, soul, thoughts, home

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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