Let Us Always

Let us not care when our lips rain sounds
that revolve around dreams
where our strength
requires effort in saying
I love you.

In those times when our faces prepare
for answers when we are all alone
let us somehow
be brought together,
holding hands, down on our knees.

Let us allow our fingers to run away
into the clear waters
of the language of our hearts
until we are lifted up
and refreshed anew.

Let our hearts always skip a beat
at the sight of the other
and our bodies
sway towards one another to bring
comfort into our lives.

Let us always dry each other's tears
and send the pain
we see in the other's eyes
into the arms that wait
to crush its very air.

Author's Note

Artist *Pavel Bergr

Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

Oh my the last stanza is a killer, crush the very air - this adds a pain to the ending for those that have yet to taste the truth of love, not the phyiscal touch but more the mental inner comfort that when two hearts attuned can speak to one another with just a glance or gesture.
Beautifully penned, keep em coming

[EMF]

I use words like sublime and beautiful in connection to your work. Sometimes though, in actuality, words just can't sum up how good you are. Hopefully you 'll know by now.

[Ruth]

Allow all else to crumble and know hearts can still beat in time with each other, not an easy feat, but love holds much wisdom and courage :) xoxo

[VelvetRosetta]

First off I have to say this Image is stunning.

Neva, this is something I wish every couple could experience. This is what true love should be like,
Love it!

[Aidz]

Roamantilatasticulous..... hows that for a word to describe this scribe :)

[nathan]

'Let us not care when our lips rain sounds that revolve around dreams'
How beautiful is that!!!
Your poems always excite and stir me up Neva,
totally awesome

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

real romantic!
i love the repetitive rhythm too.

[?]

Let us allow our fingers to run away
into the clear waters
of the language of our hearts

Such a beautiful love poem. Reads as if it truly comes from deep within the heart.
Awesome Neva

[bobby]

You are otherworldly and I love it!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Powerful, connective stuff. Like positive and negative forces firing up the antenna to connect us together.