As If You Wrote the Book of Me - Video Reading

Poetry Video Reading

Author's Note

Reviews

[Kaylor Mason]

I finally got sound at the public terminal (headphones) This poem is beautiful, and it soulnds as if you're writing either to your soul mate or to God (or both, I guess). As in all poems, the last line makes or breaks it, and "you turn the pages of my soul"; that one can steal breath from the most passionate of poets. Also, I can tell you weren't lying when your profile said you were from Georgia--your southern accent rings through giving excellent inflections to the verses.

[I have to be really careful how I review any lady's writing, in case a suspicious, jealous husband or boyfriend happens to read it, ya know? I've already gotten into several dangerous situations with that stuff in my own town]

Anyway, this poem is a sweet testament to the gentleness of love and friendship.

Nice work, ma'am.

[bobby]

An excersize of eloquence The importance of abstract attention and detail. As the imagination sees so go the words we speak.
The toohbrush and the wheel

[bobby]

Like a kiss I stare wanting for more of you...

[joshua deathdealer]

This is brilliantly beautiful. I agree with Emma. Hearing your voice is so much more special than reading it. Excellent work..xx

[emmajoy]

Wonderful .. truly! Listened three times to hear every word, maybe a little fast for me - but then, I like to savour phrase. But, Neva. hearing your voice brings the person as well as the words nearer and that's what language is supposed to do.

[EMF]

Just when I needed something good... I got extasy.

[Cassie Fraga]

oooohhhh..... that is sooooo COOL!! I loved it to the max!!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This is so very creative, and brilliant! Enjoyed alot!