I finally got sound at the public terminal (headphones) This poem is beautiful, and it soulnds as if you're writing either to your soul mate or to God (or both, I guess). As in all poems, the last line makes or breaks it, and "you turn the pages of my soul"; that one can steal breath from the most passionate of poets. Also, I can tell you weren't lying when your profile said you were from Georgia--your southern accent rings through giving excellent inflections to the verses.
[I have to be really careful how I review any lady's writing, in case a suspicious, jealous husband or boyfriend happens to read it, ya know? I've already gotten into several dangerous situations with that stuff in my own town]
Anyway, this poem is a sweet testament to the gentleness of love and friendship.
As always a beautiful heart felt piece of poetry and how true a sentiment to a loved one or close friend, for truly have they not added foot notes on our pages or helped shape our ending. I had to go through YouTube itself to hear this but hey it was a good excuse to listen to I dream a dream again, never tire of that song.
Beautiful poem and deeply touching, keep em' coming
I always expect the best from you my friend and as alway's im never let down your the cool summer breeze on a sultry summer night a southern poet of perfection cheers your drunken friend and half insane amigo Gonzo
I finally got sound at the public terminal (headphones) This poem is beautiful, and it soulnds as if you're writing either to your soul mate or to God (or both, I guess). As in all poems, the last line makes or breaks it, and "you turn the pages of my soul"; that one can steal breath from the most passionate of poets. Also, I can tell you weren't lying when your profile said you were from Georgia--your southern accent rings through giving excellent inflections to the verses.
[I have to be really careful how I review any lady's writing, in case a suspicious, jealous husband or boyfriend happens to read it, ya know? I've already gotten into several dangerous situations with that stuff in my own town]
Anyway, this poem is a sweet testament to the gentleness of love and friendship.
Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia.
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