Embroidered Heart

Lovely fields of vision seen
In all the days of you
Sewn gently in the heart of hearts
With silken threads of blue

Embroidered in the sky by stars
Drifting as to the sea
Stitched in love by the hand of time
Forever yours to be

Memories sweet, a picture there
Of love I have for you
Held in place by knots of love
Forever to hold true

Framed in love in the finest gold
Caught up in eternity
To stand in halls of love divine
For all the world to see

Author's Note

Artist* Anne Farrall DoyleThe-Red-Shawl

Reviews

[realmwriter]

Very good, The flow is paced nicely for the piece and the structure fits well too. Inspirational and uplifting,I like it...!

[Robert Haigh]

Very expressive and poetic. The imagery is both strong and delicate at the same time.

[Mary Fioratti]

This picture with your poem melt in a such perfect way! When I read a poem, I always chose a sentence that I think it is the best insight of the poet. Here is the one that I chose in this poem: "Stitched in love by the hand of time" - how perfect this sentence it is!
*Mary*

[Janice Ann]

Beautifully expressed dear! I love the structure and the flow and your writing needs to be read out loud. It is too good to be locked inside one's mouth!

[Me]

It is a real joy to read this poem .

[Hayley]

I know I already reviewed this, but coming back to it I can say that this appeals to me because of the structure of the poem itself! (It's similar to mine!)
I think you do very well with rhymes and yes, this is perfection!

[Birdman313]

love the last stanza this is a great poem

[Dream Weaver]

Amazing flow, heart warming better still..
Nice one Neva xo

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I like the artwork also. The strong description made the artwork come to life.
"Held in place by knots of love
Forever to hold true"
I like the places you took me with your powerful poetry. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

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rolls off the tongue like honey..divine..and metered beautifully