Soft Words Weep in Stillness

The early morning listens
to soft words that weep in stillness
Echoing from the treetops
of their existence
Distant mountains breathe
an air of sadness
Into the verses that now arise
From my soul

In places where the sunrise
accepts forever's
gentle fade
Stand the tears
upon a raindrop's face
Falling a thousand times
to be lost
in the shadows
Where they play among the pages
Of my day

When the scent of a special grace,
smiles into my depths
Sweet spirals of my existence
break through
I find I am breathing out an air
of precious gladness
Into the verses of soft words
That ensue

Reviews

[quinfinn]

you display a propensity for skillfully attaching romance and tender raw emotion to the written word, which i greatly admire and enjoy. you are indeed a romantic poet of the first order, worthy of praise and attention. obviously... you possess the combination of a lover's heart and a warrior soul. exquisite...

[Birdman313]

the beginning was beautiful enjoyed this poem
the picture is lovely also to go along with this.

[Aidz]

Neva this one is truly special... every now and then you exceed yourself and this is one of these times

BRAVO take a bow

[nowhere]

the tears of a teardrop, thank you for the thought.

[...]

Wow ever so lovely, I loved that picture as well.
Amazing write!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

The ghost of feelings never forgotten, but left to pain others, that picture is you my love, it's you x

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I'm so impressed by your work Miss Flores : )

[Dream Weaver]

A captivating sequence of annotated
words. Phantasmagorical in your
description...Loved it!

[Rene Velez]

excellent write, poignant and surreal...

[Ruth]

Balanced, poignant and blistering! Sensational love! xoxo

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Enjoyed reading your work this afternoon..Good one to go with the picture..Sunflower