No Explanation Needed

The moon hangs above two lovers
never fading
from all they want.
Their lips speak a language
of their own.
There need be no explanation
of the urges articulated
between them,
twisting and turning as the misty morning
makes itself known.

They have been pulled under waves
that crash through their fingers
and linger on their tongues
as love.
Altering how they hold each others heart
within the soil of their being,
worn as a scent displayed as beauty
that can only be
from heaven above.

A walk of response places in full view
conversations that cannot
be denied.
Their hearts overflow with sweet passion
face to face,
remembering how the moon hung sweetly
singing stories of adoration
above them
never fading
from this precious place.

Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

They have been pulled under waves
that crash through their fingers
and linger on their tongues
as love.

This is a beautiful use of imagery and metaphor, the whole gentleness of the piece makes one sigh, you capture the romance between these moonlit lovers with a tenderness that never intrudes only admires their love. I loved it, keep em' coming

[Teri B]

Very tender! :)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Letting the fingers do the talking...Letting the lips do the talking...
Man oh man...this was freaking hot! It was unbridled passion wrapped
up with a romantic and elegant touch. I marvel at how you can write
about such primal emotion with class.

[∂αʌ<..]

a majestic poem Neva...simply sublime!

[Art]

Such a lovely piece Neva...your combination of love and the Moon takes one into a reflective state of awareness not only of the immensity they both express but of the longevity of how love can be..... just as the Moon ...eternal...very creative work my friend

[InkSlinger]

I think "Inyourshadow" sums this piece up best.. simply beautiful!!
A tenderness that never intrudes, only admires.. FANTASTIC work!!

[Lily Mae]

"A walk of response places in full view
conversations that cannot
be denied."

Just another heart and soul write Neva.. beautiful..xx

[joshua deathdealer]

I must tell you I drew upon memories to paint the imagery detailed in your words so this read really touched me. This is beautiful work Neva..xx