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A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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The moon hangs above two lovers never fading...........

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The moon hangs above two lovers
never fading
from all they want.
Their lips speak a language
of their own.
There need be no explanation
of the urges articulated
between them,
twisting and turning as the misty morning
makes itself known.

They have been pulled under waves
that crash through their fingers
and linger on their tongues
as love.
Altering how they hold each others heart
within the soil of their being,
worn as a scent displayed as beauty
that can only be
from heaven above.

A walk of response places in full view
conversations that cannot
be denied.
Their hearts overflow with sweet passion
face to face,
remembering how the moon hung sweetly
singing stories of adoration
above them
never fading
from this precious place.

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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They have been pulled under waves
that crash through their fingers
and linger on their tongues
as love.

This is a beautiful use of imagery and metaphor, the whole gentleness of the piece makes one sigh, you capture the romance between these moonlit lovers with a tenderness that never intrudes only admires their love. I loved it, keep em' coming

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Great sensuality!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I agree and lovely picture!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Hmmm. . .wow. It maker me long for one I know not yet

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sublimely romantic. As though it is an ode to their love. Sing their adoration to each other. Another beauty, my dear!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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This is the reason I check your profile twice a day. A wonderfully erotic, sensual piece that makes you feel quite warm while you read it. Wonderfuy soft, gentle and passionate. You know I'm going to say beautiful, cos it is

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is sublime and just floes so well that means sensualiity and romance just convey perfectly to me :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice writing, lovely and endearing, but I expect no less

Posted 13 Years Ago


A amazing poem. The powerful description took me to the moon and into the desire of the poem. What the moon could tell if we listen? Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great poem! well done! I think i need a cigarette

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wonderful as always Neva. True romanitc, as upper clever written here.
~ Elisa Laura

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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