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A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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The moon hangs above two lovers never fading...........

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The moon hangs above two lovers
never fading
from all they want.
Their lips speak a language
of their own.
There need be no explanation
of the urges articulated
between them,
twisting and turning as the misty morning
makes itself known.

They have been pulled under waves
that crash through their fingers
and linger on their tongues
as love.
Altering how they hold each others heart
within the soil of their being,
worn as a scent displayed as beauty
that can only be
from heaven above.

A walk of response places in full view
conversations that cannot
be denied.
Their hearts overflow with sweet passion
face to face,
remembering how the moon hung sweetly
singing stories of adoration
above them
never fading
from this precious place.

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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They have been pulled under waves
that crash through their fingers
and linger on their tongues
as love.

This is a beautiful use of imagery and metaphor, the whole gentleness of the piece makes one sigh, you capture the romance between these moonlit lovers with a tenderness that never intrudes only admires their love. I loved it, keep em' coming

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Mmmmm Neva a beautiful write once again, sounds like pining for a lost love or someone may be missing someone to me but wot would I know :P

Posted 13 Years Ago


An absolutely enchanting piece of work you have here. Vivid visuals and imagery, romantic and sweet.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautiful phrasing of words! Love It!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow. Fantastic lines in this piece. Beautifully written, it gave me the chills. Nicely done!

Posted 13 Years Ago


so much felt with the unsaid; a warm acceptance - a wonderful feeling

Posted 13 Years Ago


Reading a poem of your is like being pulled and submerged into a magical world. Your words make my skin sing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Heartfelt and flowing with vibrant imagery and emotion.

Posted 13 Years Ago


i pictured the whole scen well the sweet things not the other parts thi was aqwesome love the awesome description you gave you rock neva !:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


very beautiful poem I loved it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow. That's all I can say.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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