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A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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The moon hangs above two lovers never fading...........

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The moon hangs above two lovers
never fading
from all they want.
Their lips speak a language
of their own.
There need be no explanation
of the urges articulated
between them,
twisting and turning as the misty morning
makes itself known.

They have been pulled under waves
that crash through their fingers
and linger on their tongues
as love.
Altering how they hold each others heart
within the soil of their being,
worn as a scent displayed as beauty
that can only be
from heaven above.

A walk of response places in full view
conversations that cannot
be denied.
Their hearts overflow with sweet passion
face to face,
remembering how the moon hung sweetly
singing stories of adoration
above them
never fading
from this precious place.

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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They have been pulled under waves
that crash through their fingers
and linger on their tongues
as love.

This is a beautiful use of imagery and metaphor, the whole gentleness of the piece makes one sigh, you capture the romance between these moonlit lovers with a tenderness that never intrudes only admires their love. I loved it, keep em' coming

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Each stanza just beautiful!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gorgeous, with just the ever so slight hint of friction. Just Beautiful Neva!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing and powerful used of words and imagery
This poem expresses deep feelings of love
And beautiful desire and sensual feelings!
Great job hugsss:)


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love the word choice used in this piece, it conveys the message beautifully!Great write!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

as usual, exemplary, compassionate
heartfelt and sincere
no other explanation needed
loved it Neva
allen
oh, and by the way....Great picture

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is a lovely poem the the use of imagery and metaphor is outstanding .the romance was with tenderness and creation

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simply a lovely creation with no
explanation needed xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful! Love the feeling I get reading this. Very romantic and passionate.
100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was a beautiful piece Neva...Great work :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


scenic emotional wavelets tugging at the tides of the heart~ beautiful~

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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