The Deepest Blue

You lovingly painted me the deepest shade of blue
Softly wrapped me in a frame of golden hue
From the very first day you walked into my life
You painted me in your picture, without you

I stood alone on a canvas of the starkest white
Such a radiant speck of deepest blue
Smiling as you painted my heart into your hands
I watched from this picture without you

I am your masterpiece, one of a kind
Your own lovely creation of design to view
Forever to stand in the lonely halls of your flame
So hopelessly in love...with you

I stand alone on this canvas of the starkest white
Midnight blue from love's palette of hues
You can find me here in this picture without you
They call me......, "The Deepest Blue"

Reviews

[quinfinn]

time can be a friend, it can also dim the brilliance of fond memories. that is why i believe in putting our happiest and saddest moments or experiences into verse or some other form of art. you have captured this very well with "the deepest blue"
once again you have touched a part of me with your art, thank you for sharing

[unknown]

What a wonderful picture, and yes time can do a lot especially within patience. Great poem!

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Very emotive writing. It's fun to look at old poetry, and reflect on how our lives have evolved. A richly painted work of art.

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Really lovely and beautiful - love the picture and of course, the color blue!

[Dunlack]

I LOVE IT!! Wow this is a serious piece, you took the color blue and really took it another level. This piece was well thought out...Beautiful.

[Audrey Howitt]

I am glad that you are smiling my dear Neva! Beautifully done!

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

I can see the difference between this old and the newest ones I've been seeing. Its always good to see old writes and compare to see how much the artist has grown with her talents. Which you can clearly see reading your work.

Great write!

[Priyanka Natesh]

What wonderful lines! Oh I was so mesmerized by the sheer beauty and love of this poem. Definitely one of the best poems I have read ma'am. Thank you :)

[Forest Green]

Excellent poem of isolation and loneliness illustrated by beauty without companionship. Truly impressive...!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

what a beautiful melody of images~ they weep but their is also a lightness that permeates the sorrow~lovely

[Muse]

I can see your inspiration sweet Neva. And it glows the deepest hue of love and compassion. It's more than art this time...it's a reflection of your smile and soul. xo