The Deepest Blue

You lovingly painted me the deepest shade of blue
Softly wrapped me in a frame of golden hue
From the very first day you walked into my life
You painted me in your picture, without you

I stood alone on a canvas of the starkest white
Such a radiant speck of deepest blue
Smiling as you painted my heart into your hands
I watched from this picture without you

I am your masterpiece, one of a kind
Your own lovely creation of design to view
Forever to stand in the lonely halls of your flame
So hopelessly in love...with you

I stand alone on this canvas of the starkest white
Midnight blue from love's palette of hues
You can find me here in this picture without you
They call me......, "The Deepest Blue"

Reviews

[quinfinn]

time can be a friend, it can also dim the brilliance of fond memories. that is why i believe in putting our happiest and saddest moments or experiences into verse or some other form of art. you have captured this very well with "the deepest blue"
once again you have touched a part of me with your art, thank you for sharing

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

The masterpiece analogy was simply amazing!
And the wording was absolutely beautiful!
Excellent job!

[Pebbles]

This is so beautiful Neva ... i hope u are tranquil in your blueness and not lonely witin the canvas xx

[LittleSpinne]

Beautifully done. I really enjoyed reading it. It's one of those that I like to read two or three times to really get the feel. You have a wonderful spark; don't let it fizzle out because you're clearly capable of wonderful work. I adore your style.

[Marie Harrison]

You're poem really got to me more the second time I read it.
It really is an incredible message. Thank you for posting.

[Birdman313]

old but good enjoyed your poem some times I post old ones just to see how my writing has evolved over the years ,, bring more oldies but goodies

[VelvetRosetta]

Blue...can be calming but also passionate, this is a gorgeous piece of writing Neva.
Forever to stand in the lonely halls of your flame...love this line!

[.:Lu:.]

Amazing, to be frank. Just amazing. And with the metaphor of blue, it pieces together well.

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This is very deep and meaningful, Ever so wonderful.
Stright from the heart, So wonderful Neva!

[Aidz]

To open your heart and have it on display, painted, if you will upon a canvas, showing an undying love and beauty....... as always Neva... majic

[Thea]

Aw, I love BLUE...So beautiful...I love this piece, Neva...You seem full of inspiration...
:)))