The Deepest Blue

You lovingly painted me the deepest shade of blue
Softly wrapped me in a frame of golden hue
From the very first day you walked into my life
You painted me in your picture, without you

I stood alone on a canvas of the starkest white
Such a radiant speck of deepest blue
Smiling as you painted my heart into your hands
I watched from this picture without you

I am your masterpiece, one of a kind
Your own lovely creation of design to view
Forever to stand in the lonely halls of your flame
So hopelessly in love...with you

I stand alone on this canvas of the starkest white
Midnight blue from love's palette of hues
You can find me here in this picture without you
They call me......, "The Deepest Blue"

Reviews

[quinfinn]

time can be a friend, it can also dim the brilliance of fond memories. that is why i believe in putting our happiest and saddest moments or experiences into verse or some other form of art. you have captured this very well with "the deepest blue"
once again you have touched a part of me with your art, thank you for sharing

[Arielle Hill]

Love it!!! The hue metephores are awsome. This poem paints a pictue of the depth of feelings that is expressed.

[a lesbian writer]

this is a very pretty write, well-written and easy to follow..i love the style of your writes..thank you for sharing..

[light and ashes]

I love it! So creative! It is lovely with poignant loneliness that flows through out the entire piece. The woman feeling like a ornament on his wall from which he adores and admires from afar but never is he to be with you or to touch you and make you feel his love. The life of this woman is a cold one. This is so sad and beautiful, 100

[EMF]

And so I return. To this poem agan. It has become like an old friend and I vist occassionally... well often really, for the beauty it conveys with every word. I would miss it.

Wonderful poem! so touching! and love the purity in it! well done Neva.

[MS. BABy]

you are to me the epitome of romance, i so enjoy the way u love Neva

[Larry Dyson]

so no one else thinks this I am saying this blue is also my aura color so I identify with it...but I am not the fortunate man who is the center of Neva's world...safe huggs

[November Gold]

Breathtaking writing, full of emotion, passion and love, wow. There is such a beautiful flow to your words here and the message is so loud yet painted so eloquently

[KAREN]

Beautiful, and can feel the love in the words of this poem. I love the third and last stanzas.