Our souls all became transparent as glass as we drank in new strength when light did impart.....
Twisted within the East we drank in silent footsteps halfway between the days, at least a thousand times. Hidden inside our slumber, visions of strength came into view, through years unkind.
Pictures of sweetness lay under everything we saw. No second thoughts drifted from our pillows. Until we wandered into the rains that fell from the shadowed eyes of our unsung heroes.
Faded air from the West turned corners, began to shine upon our names. We all confessed from our souls as we watched storm clouds gather at midnight, heard in the sound of our shame.
Soft singing was heard from the South emptying love into all of our senses. A sea of wild seeds became an orchard of understanding; storm clouds lifted a thousand footsteps’ defenses.
Great treasure came from the North bringing heaven’s hope quietly to fill the holes in our hearts. Our souls all became transparent as glass as we drank in new strength when light did impart.
Like eating a good chocolate or drinking good coffee, this poem rolls around your mouth and is as equally sensuous. It leaves impressions flaming in your brain and soul. They don't get much better than your work. I like it. In case you didn't guess
Like eating a good chocolate or drinking good coffee, this poem rolls around your mouth and is as equally sensuous. It leaves impressions flaming in your brain and soul. They don't get much better than your work. I like it. In case you didn't guess
What a journey,
like most journeys are,
adventurous, but
leave us, tired, hungry
and low of energy.
But the wisdon the
bring us is priceless.
I love the mood of this poem.
It seemed to me this poem is descriptive of the search to the four corners of the earth for completion, finding that many pieces are missing that are needed to make the whole plan make sense.
Very spiritual and lifting...
beautiful such a beautiful image onmy mind especially this line
Our souls all became
transparent as glass as we drank
in new strength
when light did impart."
As we share common experiences, hopes and dreams, so we share the hope that from whichever direction it comes, we will not only see but live the light! This is very ethereal for me, but that adds to its appeal.
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