When Light Did Impart

When Light Did Impart

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Our souls all became transparent as glass as we drank in new strength when light did impart.....

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Twisted within the East
we drank in silent footsteps
halfway between the days,
at least a thousand times.
Hidden inside our slumber,
visions of strength came into view,
through years unkind.

Pictures of sweetness
lay under everything we saw.
No second thoughts drifted
from our pillows.
Until we wandered into the rains
that fell from the shadowed eyes
of our unsung heroes.

Faded air from the West
turned corners,
began to shine upon our names.
We all confessed from our souls
as we watched storm clouds gather
at midnight,
heard in the sound of our shame.

Soft singing was heard
from the South
emptying love into all of our senses.
A sea of wild seeds
became an orchard of understanding;
storm clouds lifted
a thousand footsteps’ defenses.

Great treasure came from the North
bringing heaven’s hope
quietly to fill the holes in our hearts.
Our souls all became
transparent as glass as we drank
in new strength
when light did impart.

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Artist Gilbert Williams

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Like eating a good chocolate or drinking good coffee, this poem rolls around your mouth and is as equally sensuous. It leaves impressions flaming in your brain and soul. They don't get much better than your work. I like it. In case you didn't guess

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Inspirational this one is :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful images and the wording sublime

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really enjoyed this piece, you took something such a human nature and made it even more beautiful than what it already. It takes a special talent to take it to the level that you did.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Beautiful and fills me with peace!
Soft singing was heard
from the south
emptying love into all our senses.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Just when I thought your work couldn't get any better--You floored me with this! One to come back to again and again!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautifully written, leaving a images and impressions of calmness in the reader's mind. Beautiful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A lot of love and soul went into this piece. If you are talking about
When the light Communicates it fills our soul with strength
I am touched by the sense of peace that you have
Brought to my soul with your words
Excellent poem--Hugsssss :>



Posted 13 Years Ago


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I think I like this poem. A little odd, but yes I do like it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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What imagery. A great Goddess of love blowing her peace on the people below. This was some "fantasy" for you. I enjoyed it, you should try this genre more often. xo

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Wow Neva, your word play as usual is so amazing :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Tags: footsteps, clouds, storms, heart, soul

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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