Our souls all became transparent as glass as we drank in new strength when light did impart.....
Twisted within the East we drank in silent footsteps halfway between the days, at least a thousand times. Hidden inside our slumber, visions of strength came into view, through years unkind.
Pictures of sweetness lay under everything we saw. No second thoughts drifted from our pillows. Until we wandered into the rains that fell from the shadowed eyes of our unsung heroes.
Faded air from the West turned corners, began to shine upon our names. We all confessed from our souls as we watched storm clouds gather at midnight, heard in the sound of our shame.
Soft singing was heard from the South emptying love into all of our senses. A sea of wild seeds became an orchard of understanding; storm clouds lifted a thousand footsteps’ defenses.
Great treasure came from the North bringing heaven’s hope quietly to fill the holes in our hearts. Our souls all became transparent as glass as we drank in new strength when light did impart.
Like eating a good chocolate or drinking good coffee, this poem rolls around your mouth and is as equally sensuous. It leaves impressions flaming in your brain and soul. They don't get much better than your work. I like it. In case you didn't guess
I really enjoyed this piece, you took something such a human nature and made it even more beautiful than what it already. It takes a special talent to take it to the level that you did.
A lot of love and soul went into this piece. If you are talking about
When the light Communicates it fills our soul with strength
I am touched by the sense of peace that you have
Brought to my soul with your words
Excellent poem--Hugsssss :>
What imagery. A great Goddess of love blowing her peace on the people below. This was some "fantasy" for you. I enjoyed it, you should try this genre more often. xo
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