I know of something acquainted with the nearest shadows...........
I know of something acquainted with the nearest shadows seeking to stand in my Eden. Seen as flames my footsteps have gone from this world I no longer taste their freedom.
The cold hard ground checks my validation, keeps me here every day. Beautiful places like that of my Eden make passion felt even more, losing the mask of my face, slip sliding away.
All the beautiful seals are removed from my bells. However, I still hear them ring. My feet once danced as unbound flames in my lovely Eden. Until shadows sprang from pages and began to sing.
Moments are erased revealing thoughts, opening the heart when the earth hangs on a day’s silence. Questions rise then crumble into the nearest shadow’s hands that fight my splendid Eden’s wildness.
Magical. I love the shadows "seeking to stand in my Eden".
Also, I must say you have a very good ending. It really ties it all together.
This is just purely read like a fairy tale. Wonderfully written!!
Eden... just the word is a song to paradise... You sing that sweet sensuality over the ages... out of the blank pages of day.. and you share glimpses of an enchantment few will ever know.
Excellent use of imagery weaved into such a beautiful tale of words. I really enjoyed reading this. Came through to me as a lovely dream of sorts. Great write. :D
Another beautiful piece Ms. Flores. Finding our own Eden is everyone's dream. too bad "our Eden's" occupy such a small piece of our lives for a 1000 complicated reasons. Someday I hope!
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