Moving Within Your Arms

I searched for release
looking at arms saying move
within the magic of me.
Morning brought flames of reason
down to earth
to walk a long road of trust
filling empty spaces
I could see.

Certainly, as love has a rhythm
and my lips knew the pleasure
it bestowed.
Holding in the sound
was much more than I could bear
and nothing would keep me
waiting
to feel its flow.

I found a companion
who lit a fire under heartbreak
until it drifted
into a twilight unknown.
Awakening the child inside me
to breathe in a new brightness
of peace,
heartbreak was gone.

You are where I found release, never hesitating
to give enough to fill the empty spaces
with trust.
Certainly, as love has a rhythm
my lips are bound
to the flow,
move within your arms,
I must.

Reviews

[ivizarx]

certainly do always love your impressive skills as a writer/poet. And love and romance poetry, although overdone and overrated, is still shown to be possibly moving emotionally and conceptionally as shown here by your word work. well-done I say, and as for others who don't, well they lack the eye sight and mind to acknowledge the work of a true artist ^_^

[Audrey Howitt]

I am not sure what else to add--I feel as though it has already been said. You are such a talented writer--there is so much depth of feeling in this piece, as in all your work--and the flow is always so beautiful--so much art moves inside you Neva--a pleasure to read your work!

[Jvl narasimharao]

I think it is romantic poem or a poem on love.This so sweet and touching that only you can write like this

[Ruth]

Yes...I agree with ivizarx....this is art! Beautiful, as ever....those empty spaces take some filling at times and when we can find someone to share it with or take away some of the shadows...that is a good feeling...there is so much innocence held onto through this Neva, lovely piece! xx

[Tom C]

Not sure about this one. Do you want our or are you happy within?

[EMF]

Speechless.

[Larry Dyson]

Joyful release of heart bound love felt.compelling

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Love and its joy and feelings portrayed so magnificentlt as far as I'm concerned. And certainly "I found a companion
who lit a fire under heartbreak
until it drifted
into a twilight unknown"

says it so well indeed :)

[Muse]

Awakening the child inside me
this is true love.......when the child-like innocence comes alive. You see the world new when deeply blinded by love. A very beautiful write Neva!