Moving Within Your Arms

I searched for release
looking at arms saying move
within the magic of me.
Morning brought flames of reason
down to earth
to walk a long road of trust
filling empty spaces
I could see.

Certainly, as love has a rhythm
and my lips knew the pleasure
it bestowed.
Holding in the sound
was much more than I could bear
and nothing would keep me
waiting
to feel its flow.

I found a companion
who lit a fire under heartbreak
until it drifted
into a twilight unknown.
Awakening the child inside me
to breathe in a new brightness
of peace,
heartbreak was gone.

You are where I found release, never hesitating
to give enough to fill the empty spaces
with trust.
Certainly, as love has a rhythm
my lips are bound
to the flow,
move within your arms,
I must.

Reviews

[ivizarx]

certainly do always love your impressive skills as a writer/poet. And love and romance poetry, although overdone and overrated, is still shown to be possibly moving emotionally and conceptionally as shown here by your word work. well-done I say, and as for others who don't, well they lack the eye sight and mind to acknowledge the work of a true artist ^_^

[MS. BABy]

you are so gifted in sending out that passion you have to be a very passionate person every time I read you it is like no other, I can just feel it...wonderful

[KAREN]

Beautiful! It moved my heart, it is so romantic.
Certainly, as love has a rhythm
and my lips knew the pleasure
it bestowed.

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a touching and heartfelt poem of love. It is soft and sweet one of respect and equality between the two people. tender emotions shared and tender moments revealed.

[Gomer LePoet]

I was searching for my love to dance with me as I read this. Holding her in my arms is a dream that lit a fire inside my heart just as your words do. thanks Ms. Flores.

[Thea]

Stunning write...Very romantic and heartfelt piece... :)))

[Lily Mae]

"I found a companion
who lit a fire under heartbreak"

I love this.. a very heartfelt and powerful write Neva..x

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I like the kind and tender words.
"I found a companion
who lit a fire under heartbreak
until it drifted
into a twilight unknown."
Hard to lose the wall of protection. When we do. Life can be good. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Aidz]

Ok I used a thesaurus and came up with this, told ya I was running out of words to describe your rights, so you pick one

attractive, pretty, handsome, good-looking, alluring, prepossessing; lovely, charming, delightful, appealing, engaging, winsome; ravishing, gorgeous, stunning, arresting, glamorous, bewitching, beguiling; graceful, elegant, exquisite, aesthetic, artistic, decorative, magnificent; informal divine, drop-dead gorgeous, easy on the eye, killer, cute, foxy;

[unknown]

Beautiful touches!

[Rene Velez]

well within the realm of love and tenderness...well done Neva.