Moving Within Your Arms

I searched for release
looking at arms saying move
within the magic of me.
Morning brought flames of reason
down to earth
to walk a long road of trust
filling empty spaces
I could see.

Certainly, as love has a rhythm
and my lips knew the pleasure
it bestowed.
Holding in the sound
was much more than I could bear
and nothing would keep me
waiting
to feel its flow.

I found a companion
who lit a fire under heartbreak
until it drifted
into a twilight unknown.
Awakening the child inside me
to breathe in a new brightness
of peace,
heartbreak was gone.

You are where I found release, never hesitating
to give enough to fill the empty spaces
with trust.
Certainly, as love has a rhythm
my lips are bound
to the flow,
move within your arms,
I must.

Reviews

[ivizarx]

certainly do always love your impressive skills as a writer/poet. And love and romance poetry, although overdone and overrated, is still shown to be possibly moving emotionally and conceptionally as shown here by your word work. well-done I say, and as for others who don't, well they lack the eye sight and mind to acknowledge the work of a true artist ^_^

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

An immersed sense of for-longing binds us all to the tempered moments of emotional release that you express in this piece Neva, well done, a great read.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Lovely.

[Tony]

Neva, trust after heartbreak is at times almost impossible, and the word trust, is the key in this well written piece. You seem to have found that tranquility again.
Your word choice is excellent, helping the flow of the poem easy to interpret.

[Larry Dyson]

I searched for release
looking at arms saying move
within the magic of me.
Morning brought the tongue of flame ,
reasoning of the nights events
down to earth .
To walk a long road of trust
filling empty spaces
I could see

[Sleepless]

i could just picture the image !:) *sigh * beautiful poem neva !:)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

one of the reasons I like your romantic voice is that you take it far beyond the generic field of romance writing and in your golden bowl infuse it with surreality through the most graceful fluid language~ the emotional content is always balanced and honest~and the embracing quality of the tale always hits its poignant mark~ gems~

[Allen Smuckler]

you're the best, Neva
case closed...
another work of art
you tickle the twine every time...always with a new and more perfect slant..
Every word seems to be placed just right to make the next word and preceding thought even more powerful...and meaningful.
allen

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

Neva what a beautiful piece. You are one of the most amazing writters I know. You have a true phonomonal talent that is so very rare. I have missed reading your words. xo

[Richielee]

Neva you always tick all the boxes, you're heart is so pure : )))

[Marie Harrison]

You are where I found release, never hesitating
to give enough to fill the empty spaces
with trust.

Romance in high gear.
Fiery poem