Moving Within Your Arms

I searched for release
looking at arms saying move
within the magic of me.
Morning brought flames of reason
down to earth
to walk a long road of trust
filling empty spaces
I could see.

Certainly, as love has a rhythm
and my lips knew the pleasure
it bestowed.
Holding in the sound
was much more than I could bear
and nothing would keep me
waiting
to feel its flow.

I found a companion
who lit a fire under heartbreak
until it drifted
into a twilight unknown.
Awakening the child inside me
to breathe in a new brightness
of peace,
heartbreak was gone.

You are where I found release, never hesitating
to give enough to fill the empty spaces
with trust.
Certainly, as love has a rhythm
my lips are bound
to the flow,
move within your arms,
I must.

Reviews

[ivizarx]

certainly do always love your impressive skills as a writer/poet. And love and romance poetry, although overdone and overrated, is still shown to be possibly moving emotionally and conceptionally as shown here by your word work. well-done I say, and as for others who don't, well they lack the eye sight and mind to acknowledge the work of a true artist ^_^

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Another beautiful work as always!
"to give enough to fill the empty spaces
with trust."
Trust...even the sound of the word is a sweet whisper.

[joshua deathdealer]

Lovely write Neva...xx

[Dream Weaver]

Great pic, and a enchanting write as well.
The last stanza says it all.....:) X

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Beautifully written. Romantic piece. Great Write!

[FallenWingz]

so romantic, i love this..kissing in the rain just its just warms me up yet i knw its cold....

[Garfield Rupe]

This is poem is beautiful,and it speaks of someone in love. Full of fire romance and passion that comes from being in love. I love the entire poem,but were I asked to pick a favorite Stanza it would be #4
You are where I found release,never hesitating
to give enough to fill the empty spaces
with trust.
Certainly,as love has a rhythm
my lips are bound
to the flow,
move within your arms,
I trust.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is a wonderful story. It must be a very special spirit to give you the comfort to just let to in this way. Trust can be very frightening to give away.

[Birdman313]

like the flow for this love poem enjoyed it

[Sukriti Suki]

What a lovely flow....what deep emotions this piece evoked in me..finding love and forgetting heartbreak....such subtle tone such deep impact. Neva you are the goddess of love poems.

[Arthur Henn]

Neva - You have a certain flare a style all your own (Beautiful)

I found a companion
who lit a fire under heartbreak
until it drifted
into a twilight unknown.
Awakening the child inside me
to breathe in a new brightness
of peace,
heartbreak was gone.

Superb!