Taste of You

The bond between us
does not quite speak to the stars
as precious carvings
but as seeds of happiness.
Here you see me in thought
rearranging reflections inside a message
held in glass.

Far away I hold my breath
then let it out to chase dream-filled sleep.  
Soft sighs escape
streaming through the night
in shells of kisses
moving ultimately to form this lovely
smile I keep.

Quivering inside my dreams
are elaborate colors
that dance on my tongue.
I taste them as whispers of you.
The bond between us does not quite
speak to the stars, but here
in my dreams is sung.

Author's Note

Artist - Mihai Criste

Reviews

[Arthur Henn]

Neva, I really like this one, especially the lines I copied below... They could be a poem by themselves.

rearranging reflections inside a message
held in glass.

moving ultimately to form this lovely
smile I keep.

Quivering inside my dreams
are elaborate colors
that dance on my tongue.

but here
in my dreams is sung.

[Cassie]

I smiled through out the whole piece, so beautiful

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Cassie :)

[SuicidePact.]

Brilliant!

[Shattered Dreams]

You have this ability to make me speechless. I don't know what it is, but you just write so well... I don't know what to say. This is fabulous. I wish I was this good. Well done!

[Mary C]

Your poetry is born out of rich experience and a poetic insight into life that keeps one absorbed throughout.

[frozensakura]

great poem! I really enjoyed reading this... thanks for sharing(:
-chole

[Groovy]

interesting piece. I love the way your lines flow and the images reach into my soul

[Art Sun]

nice work Neva...the bond between love and dreams flows within you and this poetic display filled with both...dreams and love

[Daytonight]

Breath-taking!

[joshua deathdealer]

Beautiful work..xx

[nathan]

I envy. . .