No Need to Ask

I have seen love embrace tears of a heart
 in winds of clarity,
waiting in the curve of a smile.  
It seems sweet lips
 serenade with songs breathing pleasure
 into tides
of the hardest miles.

I have known a rhyme to climb the mountains
 of idle hours reminding me
 I was born to create a dream.
 One that calls out
softly to you
 from the land of my heart’s
compassionate seams.

I have felt the touch of your heart fleeing
 its way to safety,
watching distance fade
 to a whispered mark.
When I pull it close my own flutters
 with no need to ask
 if you are my other part.

Reviews

[Larry Dyson]

In favor of the brevity of all things spoken to be the measure of the depth and quality of the feeling expressed....I would say that the 3rd Stanza should be the only stanza on this piece..it rivals anything you have written in about the last month..and that is making a very bold statement...the choice of art work is masterfully chosen...please add this to my crazy review group Neva?..Laury

[Thea]

"I have felt the touch of your heart fleeing
its way to safety,
watching distance fade
to a whispered mark."
Simply wonderful...
I like the picture too...
Striking poem... :)))

[Lily Mae]

As a whole a beauty but that last stanza hits my heart..xx

[Marie Harrison]

I love this whole poem and the scenic picture it's creates
for our minds to enjoy. But the last stanza is my favorite.
I just imagine that tender heart as it flutters.
Deep yearning in your poetry.

[Poetic Beauty]

there is beautiful imagery in this piece and the first line really caught my attention and held it all the way through. I like the like watching distance fade. That makes a bold statement. Distance fading can be amazing in many different scenarios

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Really beautiful and powerful - and perfect picture!

[Joe Shetina]

I love it.

When I pull it close my own flutters
with no need to ask
if you are my other part.

Absolutely beautiful.

[Jae]

This is a stunning masterpiece, my friend. You find such a beauty with words and it just makes me want to jump into the poems like I am the one who is living it.

~Rem