Uncut

A soft image satisfies the deepest sea
found in your eyes
recognized as comfort.
Harmony makes a new wind flow lovingly
into the arms
of old wounds suffered.  

Measured out our shores bend
to meet in passion
to taste time’s recurrent goals.
Lighted I talk with my hands
to find balance
shimmering within my soul.

Scenes pass by of places with nowhere to go,
sailing as tributes tired of singing chords
without gain.
Still, I smile magically as if I am bound
to live life uncut
yet emptied of all pain.

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

As a huge fan of your work Neva, you know I am above all honest in what I review,

"Measured out our shores bend
to meet in passion
to taste time’s recurrent goals.
Lighted I talk with my hands
to find balance
shimmering within my soul. "

This stanze screamed at me, it encompasses the mere taste of human companionship and the reluctance to let go of sexual and loving affairs, well done, great read!

[?]

Well here I sit reading this with my morning coffee. And this sure runs over my tongue better than my coffee. lol
Such a smooth piece. Passionate.

A soft image satisfies the deepest sea
found in your eyes
recognized as comfort.
Harmony makes a new wind flow lovingly

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Wow this blew me away. This is really lovely. Thanks to Thomas Fittzgerald for sending this my way. I think I might pass it along. Great Write!

[deeps]

Wow Neva, This write is so lovely,
I really enjoyed your words.
I also feel my heart tug through this.
Such an amazing write.

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Harmony makes a new wind flow lovingly
into the arms
of old wounds suffered.

........lovely words, I enjoyed. Best wishes.

[Richielee]

wow Neva, i wish i could find the right words to praise this but they would be inadeqate,so i'll say it in layman's terms; this is a fantastic write which deserves 100 out of 100 : )

[Jibey]

Intriguing image - the living 'uncut'... which I didn't really understand... but I did appreciater the gentel resonance pf harmony and chords that carried with it your sensationally romantic passion....

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and powerful poem. Each set of lines adding up to making the ending a true statement.
"Still, I smile magically as if I am bound
to live life uncut
yet emptied of all pain."
Hard to escape pain. But we must go on and learn from the mistakes. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Garfield Rupe]

This is so lovely. Happy and at the same time sad also.
I look forward to seeing this work on your Poetry Blog where I feel it will be well received by those who read it!

[EMF]

Real good coffee tastes as good as it smells. Thsi poem matches its ideas and tehmes perfectly. It has an aroma that bypasses the nose, goes directly to the brain and stays there, letting you know this is the way it should be. Every time you read a poem. The object you judge your experience of others by.

Get the idea. It's not just good. It's better than that

[Joe Shetina]

Astounding, as all of your work is. Excellent.