Uncut

A soft image satisfies the deepest sea
found in your eyes
recognized as comfort.
Harmony makes a new wind flow lovingly
into the arms
of old wounds suffered.  

Measured out our shores bend
to meet in passion
to taste time’s recurrent goals.
Lighted I talk with my hands
to find balance
shimmering within my soul.

Scenes pass by of places with nowhere to go,
sailing as tributes tired of singing chords
without gain.
Still, I smile magically as if I am bound
to live life uncut
yet emptied of all pain.

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

As a huge fan of your work Neva, you know I am above all honest in what I review,

"Measured out our shores bend
to meet in passion
to taste time’s recurrent goals.
Lighted I talk with my hands
to find balance
shimmering within my soul. "

This stanze screamed at me, it encompasses the mere taste of human companionship and the reluctance to let go of sexual and loving affairs, well done, great read!

[.quan.011.]

This is beautiful poem.

[Audrey Howitt]

As always, your work speaks loudly to me of passion, compassion and the sharing and distance between souls--

Harmony makes a new wind flow lovingly
into the arms
of old wounds suffered.

You make magic happen.

[Kouhou Mei]

I know I'm not very literate. And I know I'm not the best poet. But I don't have to be to know that this is an amazing poem.

[Tom C]

I like the way it describes lack of passion. Your very in tune to the feelilng.

[Sleepless]

nice poem neva :)

[Extant]

Someone who has found their stride in life and lives knowing that no matter what comes of chaos and emotional uncertainity they are happy with what they are, who they are.

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Really soft and pretty. Nice poem about love and music!

[obvious pseudonym]

i great way too live free of pain not to edit your world or watch what you say for fear of being ridiculed or embarassed. i think it may be almost to live your life entierly without fear but it is what this poem speaks of

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Passionate oozes out as I read, very enjoyable :)

[Arthur Henn]

Neva - This is a beautiful written poem - The pic go very well with it. I'm saving that photo to my archives. This is one of them works of art that you want to hear read - Narrated at the beginning of a film.

Love it - Love the imagery it encompasses and leaves stamped within this readers mind...