Uncut

A soft image satisfies the deepest sea
found in your eyes
recognized as comfort.
Harmony makes a new wind flow lovingly
into the arms
of old wounds suffered.  

Measured out our shores bend
to meet in passion
to taste time’s recurrent goals.
Lighted I talk with my hands
to find balance
shimmering within my soul.

Scenes pass by of places with nowhere to go,
sailing as tributes tired of singing chords
without gain.
Still, I smile magically as if I am bound
to live life uncut
yet emptied of all pain.

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

As a huge fan of your work Neva, you know I am above all honest in what I review,

"Measured out our shores bend
to meet in passion
to taste time’s recurrent goals.
Lighted I talk with my hands
to find balance
shimmering within my soul. "

This stanze screamed at me, it encompasses the mere taste of human companionship and the reluctance to let go of sexual and loving affairs, well done, great read!

[Omar Fendri]

dulcet... soft and flowing... a sweet breeze of emotions blew gently in my face as I read this poem... and I shivered. My skin had that very sweet shudder. The second stanza is harmonious. You cared every stanza artistically and brought emotions beautifully... Such an adorable write to read... A perfection in all the levels: The description, The imaginary, The scene ...

[unknown]

Love this Neva, isn't more fulfilling and nice to live life raw and uncut? In certain aspects tha is.

[Jae]

Absolutely gorgeous poem right here. It feels so human and alive with all of humanly needs. Very nice work.

~Rem

[Andrea Vargas]

You know i have to say i really enjoyed this piece you are a fantasti poet. Keep writing i want to read more!

[Manda]

wow! i very nice piece you have written right here! not too long but not too short either. this has a hell of a lot of meaning!

great work!
Manda

[Dream Weaver]

"I smile magically as if I am bound
to live life uncut
yet emptied of all pain."
Simply magic Neva x

[nothingnothingforgetfor..]

"Scenes pass by of places with nowhere to go"
This was a fantastic piece but this line is haunting me and made this piece come that much more alive as i read it. The dark images rolling through the eyes of my mind trying to encompass all of what you say, and then seeing these places..places of misfortune and unwelcome. Places "with nowhere to go" and this saddened me. Such a wonderful piece, full of raw power that will without a doubt jump out at anyone who reads this. Lovely!

Well well well .. this is what I would call ' An Inspired Write ' .. loved it .

[Jibin]

Really amazing poem, and i love the way it flowed itself through the poem. And i want to say that, you've a great passion in writing dear friend...
:)

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

a richly layered piece that oozes contentment.
Beautiful, Neva!