I Feel You as Soft Touches

The world could dance on the shells of their falsehood with words written in beautiful calligraphy...........

I want to see the thoughts
you breathe,
hear your words and collect them,
cradled in your honesty.
I could watch the beauty in your eyes
for eternity
without ever wishing
to walk away.  

You give me your hand
and I close my eyes,
hear the whisper of the sea
and I remember how my heart
has searched for one
such as you
knowing I have found my home.

My love,
the world could dance
on the shells of their falsehoods
with words
written in beautiful calligraphy
and your words
would continue to run in my veins
like Morse code
tapping out who I am
to me.

You fill my hope chest with your spirit
lifting my head
from the table of where my mind wanders
when I forget
to stop and smell the roses along the way.
Your words
bring precious harmony
into play.

I look through the window of my heart
where you
have pressed your lips
on a photograph of your words
and I feel you as soft touches
on my soul.
I collect them one by one
to remember,
until you again I hold.

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I can always count on you to get me heart racing with a rush of passion

My love,
the world could dance
on the shells of their falsehood
with words
written in beautiful calligraphy
and your words
would continue to run in my veins
like Morse code
tapping out who I am
to me.

love that stanza

[Seashell]

This is too beautiful.
These damned things called hearts carry a lot about with them and you have described not only that, but much, much more...and so very well at that.
Mine is full...and running over.
Thanks so very much for share also sweet review.
Babs xx
p.s. Faves 4 sure !!

[Andreisfree]

...i have been obsessively consumed by my own writings...forgive me my indiscretions...when i pluck one word from each paragraph i get: "Lips love to play, whisper of eternity" ... best read with eyes closed and lips pressed ... thank you :)

[Call It A Day]

You know love.

"I look through the window of my heart
where you
have pressed your lips
on a photograph of your words
and I feel you as soft touches
on my soul.
I collect them one by one
to remember,
until you again I hold."

Photograph of your words? Yeah, you know love. Reading you makes days less stormy.

[brenda]

really beautiful and sweet neva !:)

[EMF]

I can't sum up the beauty in this poem. The...everything. Neva, you are in a class of your own

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. it's magical to experience the emotion behind these words ... and even more magical to then write them and share them with others ... it's great to be reminded of love ... with these lyrical and soulful words ...

[Muse]

The title the pic, won me over once you penned:

written in beautiful calligraphy
and your words
would continue to run in my veins
like Morse code
tapping out who I am
to me.

Morse code....................perfectly written!

[Richielee]

oh Neva ...if there was an award for romance you'd win it every time,brilliantly written as usual and enough passion throughout to make this simple soul's heart beat alot faster.always your fan x

[SpokenWord]

I do believe I can relate to this poem in a specific way. When we find that one all things become possible, it is like they are and we are the most important thing in our life and we will do anything to secure the love we share. I think this poem speaks about the love between soul mates and your words paint them beautifully~