I Feel You as Soft Touches

The world could dance on the shells of their falsehood with words written in beautiful calligraphy...........

I want to see the thoughts
you breathe,
hear your words and collect them,
cradled in your honesty.
I could watch the beauty in your eyes
for eternity
without ever wishing
to walk away.  

You give me your hand
and I close my eyes,
hear the whisper of the sea
and I remember how my heart
has searched for one
such as you
knowing I have found my home.

My love,
the world could dance
on the shells of their falsehoods
with words
written in beautiful calligraphy
and your words
would continue to run in my veins
like Morse code
tapping out who I am
to me.

You fill my hope chest with your spirit
lifting my head
from the table of where my mind wanders
when I forget
to stop and smell the roses along the way.
Your words
bring precious harmony
into play.

I look through the window of my heart
where you
have pressed your lips
on a photograph of your words
and I feel you as soft touches
on my soul.
I collect them one by one
to remember,
until you again I hold.

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I can always count on you to get me heart racing with a rush of passion

My love,
the world could dance
on the shells of their falsehood
with words
written in beautiful calligraphy
and your words
would continue to run in my veins
like Morse code
tapping out who I am
to me.

love that stanza

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of love and missing someone. I like the soft description and story in the words. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Larry Dyson]

it is so moving the way you arrange your stanzas to
portray the lovely verses,... of the feelings you use in metaphor..softly sweetly ...they weave in and out..of the prose so lavishly embellishing the entire work...some times I am at a loss to interpret in words what exactly you are describing..except it makes me feel "this way"..and that my friend is the mark of a well drawn metaphor...feeiling it..

[Audrey Howitt]

Neva, this is simply stunning! Your work is always beautifully done, but this one just floored me.

[Kat Collins]

So romantic...cherishing the love of another. I found myself thinking of my beloved through this, wishing to share these words. Your work always moves me. Thank you for writing upon my heart...

[Dream Weaver]

A romantic uplifting poem written with
passion and desire. I love the last stanza
Neva, Gorgeous piece!

[unknown]

Beautiful!

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

So beautiful..stunning imagery and descriptions; I could feel the soft touches of this, they carressed me.
Wonderful joB~

[Pax Analog]

Exquisite rendering of tender feelings rolling out like gentle waves caressing the shore line.

Nuance is everything for letting Light/Love in, and it all starts with "I Feel You as Soft Touches."

Your words caress the mind, heart and body seamlessly.

[Ruth]

Neva, there is some amazing imagery within this..I am in awe! Beautiful as ever and wonderfully thought through! This is romance like no other! Stunning! xx

[Aidz]

I have Stone Sour- Brother playing in background and read this, it made it so beautiful as I read it each line Neva....