Heard On My Skin

Heard On My Skin

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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One by one they are heard on my skin.............

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When warm I love you’s join affection
our souls
cannot seem to say
it is time to go.
I can see
no journey’s end
that will ever prove to me
that forever
could ever think
of leaving this love
we stand by.

I hold on tight to your soul
even after
we say goodnight.
Inside my mind, I see visions
looking back at caresses
from your hands
and no door is closed
In my heart
containing any words written
you have not read.

Sometimes life feels like a river
flowing into the dawn
reaching beyond
any love song of passion
clinging to the clouds
I am in.
However, thoughts of you
sail me higher
and higher
into beautiful colors
again.

I am left breathless when I see your hands
moving within the realms
of a thousand
I love you’s
yet to be said.
I can see no journey’s end
to this forever
I feel,
as one by one
they are heard on my skin.

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
*Model and Actress - Padma Lakshmi - Photo by Marcus Klinko

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A beautiful statement of love. What a lucky person this is to be cared for so much. I love the phrase "containing any written words you have not read". As though some of this love is kept a deep secret. I wonder how frequently we all keep our love or passion for someone or something else hidden?

Posted 13 Years Ago


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so beautiful neva,i'm sure he would say "i love you"
awesome poetry :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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a really beautiful ending...its so beautiful to see that you can anticipate the "i love you's" when they havent been said yet! and your personal touch makes it a sensual poem to which the picture is perfect!
lovely poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Oh this is like having dessert before the meal.. very tasteful. I love it Neva.. To be in the energy of love...ahhh :) xx Just beautiful..xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


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What a hot, romantic poem.
Beautiful!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Added on August 5, 2011
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Tags: poetry, skin, love, soul, journey, forever

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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