For now I will write the words of love you whisper over my shoulder...........
I could never say I would like for you to be stronger than the wind or rain. You sparkle even when raging tempests are knocking on the door of time.
I can hear passion in your voice when you tell me you remember how I sang I love you in your ear and called you my Muse that whispers words of love over my shoulder.
I look into the window of your soul see my own smiling back happily in the reflection of a mirror that ripples stronger every day. I can see myself there still singing to you within this art I write in my tears of joyful rain.
If a painting of the skies could open up a tidal wave of hidden emotions that would change life for the better, I would learn how to paint for you. Then you could breathe in how I feel when you touch me each time you look at my painting again.
I would never expect you to be stronger than the wind or rain and I know you don’t expect me to paint the sky. So for now I will write the words of love you whisper over my shoulder and sing I love you, in your ear until the day I die.
Ahhhh, it's like drinking a cool glass of iced tea on the porch....I have no clue if this was to a lover, but I read it twice and felt it was for a daughter?? I love your elegance and fragile steel wings that paint a monet like poem.... beautiful.
PS: I lived in Georgia for a decade in the foothill of the Appalachians...kinda feel a sisterhood with you.
Ok, now I'm crying.. The things you do to me:) you had me at the beginning with this "For now I will write the words of love you whisper over my shoulder.." hello.. and amen.. ;) xx
nothing can be inspiring in life more than love... and Love here is doing that very well with you... It is well writing with a sense of passion and adoration and the very sensitive emotions you drew here are so real for the reader. I like some expressions (as long with the whole poem) like : The window of your soul... a tidal wave of hidden emotions.
and the last stanza is adorable.
I'm sitting here listening to Sade's "Sweetest Taboo" from the playlist on your profile page and reading this very sweet and romantic write.
I think all of us would like to have someone show that kind of passion about us. In fact I think the world would be a much better place if people could feel this kind of passion about each other more often.
Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia.
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