my fingertips trace one hundred places on your face.............
I thought I had told you, I have never loved someone like this, or felt the touch of a spirit like a thousand winds wrap around my moments in this way.
Look me in the eye and taste the passion of this wine that pours from my heart. You will then know the chemistry that makes up the rhythm of truth in these words I speak to you.
Listen to how much easier the rain falls because we hear calmer waters when we sail on the river of our sweetest emotions.
I thought you knew how I dream of drawing the curtains of love’s intoxication across our windows and calling off our search for different skies. I was sure you understood how my fingertips trace one hundred places on your face that I love more each time I seek them out with my eyes.
I thought I had told you, I have never loved someone like this, but perhaps I merely spoke these words in my mind. So I tell you now, I speak them aloud, to let there be no questions running in the meadow of everything we feel. I have never loved anyone as I love you.
Take my hand and let’s draw the curtains of love’s intoxication across our windows. Let us shut out the world and sail on the river of our sweetest emotions. I will trace those places on your face that I adore with all I am. Come wrap me in your spirit of a thousand winds.
The title alone caught my attention...
My so much to say about this, and all I can say is, I am in awe...such beauty pours from the soul...magnificent! Outstanding and going to my favs!!!
Poetry that takes your breath away...Neva that is your writing!!!
Ahhh the poets mind and torment, on show in this write Neva, sometimes we must put down our quill and confront our afflictions, although if we did that there would be no prose...... or would we lament elsewhere???
This is a great poem and I love the use of all the water details in the this poem. Love should be fluid and with the descriptions you placed in this piece it is smooth and beautiful.
That's a beautiful spirit I can't even begin to comprehend! Beautiful work on the poem--it's almost like I can hear the lady saying these words a half-inch from my ear, feel her breath on my face. This is a gorgeous poem :)
Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia.
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