Creation Ends in Done

Creation Ends in Done

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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My body knows it's not just another day, others lay to come............

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A branch from the future is felt deep in your heart, I feel it, so can you

My body knows it’s not just another day, others lay to come
Creations cry to return home to the scent of a lazy summer sun
Telling me, when I walk in verses, I will never again be numb

My head feels waves that crash, so do you, they play in words of love
I go back, breathe in their essence, but silence is never won
A miracle of comfort reigns within the benefit of a verse’s promise
Celebrated by washing over you when creation ends in done

Closer now I feel a perfect picture filling my mind’s eye, and so do you
We are witnesses here waiting as instruments to be played
To finally be looked upon with the same wonder that awakens
Marching feet that welcome the music of a verse’s parade

Have I said it all with a gracefulness more elegant than the stars above
Inspired you to pick up your pen and perhaps write with me
Will you take hold of the branch you feel deep within your heart
Creation is crying out to you, I hear it blowing in the breeze

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Artist - Vladimir Fedotko

just a little something about inspiring others to write :)

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:-D It is wonderful! I have certainly been writing more again since I've joined this site. Writing does help defy/beat the numbness, feel that which needs to be felt, deal and move foward and beyond. You do not have to write about encouraging others to write in order to do so, yet good job!

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Wow Neva..I feel so inspired to pick up a pen right now...
This poem actually made me feel lonely with the only cure
being to reach out in verse.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I feeel inspired as to write! Great poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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So perfect and you've always been an inspiration to so many.. I found you on HP from your shining light..and am blessed to all you my friend..xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


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it did inspired me to write nice poem neva !:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautiful imagery and sure is inspiring :)

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