Creation Ends in Done

A branch from the future is felt deep in your heart, I feel it, so can you
My body knows it’s not just another day, others lay to come
Creations cry to return home to the scent of a lazy summer sun
Telling me, when I walk in verses, I will never again be numb

My head feels waves that crash, so do you, they play in words of love
I go back, breathe in their essence, but silence is never won
A miracle of comfort reigns within the benefit of a verse’s promise
Celebrated by washing over you when creation ends in done

Closer now I feel a perfect picture filling my mind’s eye, and so do you
We are witnesses here waiting as instruments to be played
To finally be looked upon with the same wonder that awakens
Marching feet that welcome the music of a verse’s parade

Have I said it all with a gracefulness more elegant than the stars above
Inspired you to pick up your pen and perhaps write with me
Will you take hold of the branch you feel deep within your heart
Creation is crying out to you, I hear it blowing in the breeze

Author's Note

Artist - Vladimir Fedotko

just a little something about inspiring others to write :)

Reviews

[Melobldnfr]

:-D It is wonderful! I have certainly been writing more again since I've joined this site. Writing does help defy/beat the numbness, feel that which needs to be felt, deal and move foward and beyond. You do not have to write about encouraging others to write in order to do so, yet good job!

[Muse]

We are witnesses here waiting as instruments to be played.......................
I can see why this inspired your write. You should email the artist with this poem, I'm sure he'd be flattered!

[unknown]

Oh yes I'm glad my period of writers block is over. I am free lol.

[?]

Creation is crying out to you, I hear it blowing in the breeze

oh I love that line, the ending. Wonderful inspiration.
hmmmmmm this is me, picking up my pen, searching for paper. lol
Great poem of inspiration Neva
Thanks

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a brilliant imagery your words confess... and yes, you connect to heaven and earth it seems.. and writers needing to sense that their work is alive and well... within and without the mind and heart. Beautiful music...

[Sukriti Suki]

The flow of this piece is very good.

[Rene Velez]

very nice, I was listening to a song while i was reading this and it flowed quiet well, magic lines , really cool scribe

[Kenneth The Poet]

Very cool. This perfectly describes my desire to put pen to parchment when it suddenly strikes.

[LA Lorena]

A most inspiring and lovely write.

[White Ink]

A little something?? that was absolutely Stunning! Loved it.

[Mike Winegar]

Very inspirational! Thank you for sharing!