Creation Ends in Done

A branch from the future is felt deep in your heart, I feel it, so can you
My body knows it’s not just another day, others lay to come
Creations cry to return home to the scent of a lazy summer sun
Telling me, when I walk in verses, I will never again be numb

My head feels waves that crash, so do you, they play in words of love
I go back, breathe in their essence, but silence is never won
A miracle of comfort reigns within the benefit of a verse’s promise
Celebrated by washing over you when creation ends in done

Closer now I feel a perfect picture filling my mind’s eye, and so do you
We are witnesses here waiting as instruments to be played
To finally be looked upon with the same wonder that awakens
Marching feet that welcome the music of a verse’s parade

Have I said it all with a gracefulness more elegant than the stars above
Inspired you to pick up your pen and perhaps write with me
Will you take hold of the branch you feel deep within your heart
Creation is crying out to you, I hear it blowing in the breeze

Author's Note

Artist - Vladimir Fedotko

just a little something about inspiring others to write :)

Reviews

[Melobldnfr]

:-D It is wonderful! I have certainly been writing more again since I've joined this site. Writing does help defy/beat the numbness, feel that which needs to be felt, deal and move foward and beyond. You do not have to write about encouraging others to write in order to do so, yet good job!

[Ruth]

We are indeed love and I see such strength in your work of late! Always impressive to me! We are all able to channel the influences of life....are we open enough to? Well...we can but try and you excel at it! xx

[roy mccarthy]

love this one neva!
the rhyme cadence is awesome,
and your invite to join you in writing too.....
great great poem :)

[EMF]

You always have a way of hitting the right words in the right situation and making each poem feel perfect and specific to the reader. I may have said that before, but it bears repeating. Perfection

[Labu]

Really inspiring piece of work here, love it :)

[Aidz]

Now wot was I gunna do??? Oh yeah write.... lol

And whenever you are ready to write again with a shared pen....

[∂αʌ<..]

awesome write...just what i needed to get me back on the road!
motivational to the core!
way to go Neva!!

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a great write. The details are amazing.

[Liza]

empowering; sensual - whimsical

[Dream Weaver]

Inspirational for sure, another well penned work
of art......