Tall Green Grasses

Tall Green Grasses

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Tall green grasses kissed our words...........

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We found that tall green grasses kissed our words

when you and I walk together.
Distance could not strip away warmth
from weary ghosts.

Love’s beautiful thoughts sweetly entered in to wash
over too many night’s realizations.
Easy winds charmed our evening’s cries
existence sighed.

We found refuge writing I love you one hundred ways
with yearning hands, silken moves.
Muses smile above the tall green grasses
thus defying logic.

Love’s beautiful thoughts, touching tall green grasses
Appreciating our words with kisses
Where we found refuge writing I love you
all existence sighs.

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Artist 0 Michael Cheval

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I know I do (sigh, that is)....Great write (as usual) Neva....
You always take us on such magical rides with your images and words....
You are in truth an artist who makes your readers understand your life and times...
I am in awe of your talent...
allen


Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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I know I do (sigh, that is)....Great write (as usual) Neva....
You always take us on such magical rides with your images and words....
You are in truth an artist who makes your readers understand your life and times...
I am in awe of your talent...
allen


Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

First off let me say really cool picture choice. I also loved the image you wrote here of lovers witing I Love you's in the tall green grasses. I have missed your writing Neva. Your pen has so much magic in it!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Tall green grasses is beautiful imagery and I can't picture two lovers in a private moment walking together through all the chaos in life. Sensual moments a great reminder of the love still held. Love this piece Neva.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Writing I love you in the most basic human way. Very elemental and sweetly expressed. I really enjoy reading your work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice....very very beautifully written.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Kolidiascopic love, what a wonderful piece Neva!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is the kind of love we all dream of. Your words are spellbinding.
I lost myself in a stanza for a second.

Posted 13 Years Ago


It makes me think of the innocence when love is new... a lovely piece of romantic writing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

As did I sign at the end of this uhhhhhhhhhh

Beautiful once again

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is deep, sensual, beautiful. I love how your work is always filled with poignant emotion and has a deeper meaning than what it seems. It make you the versatile writer you really are. My favourite line " We found refuge writing I love you one hundred ways " This says so much really, it invokes a deep sense of questioning but portrays a deeper meaning, leaking from in between the words. Thank you for sharing such a great piece =)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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