Effervesce

Filling and fading with a soft caress
My playmate by the deep
Our memories diminish upon effervesce
Held up the sands of time
They keep

We bind and softly lay them all along
Like small sparks of fire
Out of the mist they are burning strong
Held closely to our soul's
Deepest desires

The dusk of evening, breaks into light
Filling with a soft caress
Memories are found in clouds of night
In the lovely surging foam
Of effervesce

Those sands of time will unbind the fires
My playmate by the deep
Found in our soul's deepest desires
The smallest spark
Will keep













 

Author's Note

*Artist - Victor Bauer - http://www.victorbauer.com/art/beach.htm

Reviews

[Larry Dyson]

really like this part...it rolls well off the tongue.."
"Filling and fading with a soft caress
My playmate by the deep
Our memories diminish (upon) effervesce
Held (up )the sands of time
They keep"

relating to being held by time..held up what do you think?...not correcting just playing withthe turn of phrase.. hope you feel free enough to do this with my writings as well...?

[Derek S.Keck]

You're poetry has spoken a thousand different aspects, that are all tied together through the same flowing stream of your soul. Like me, I feel like you've been telling the same story, yet, contriving a new aspect and understanding each and every time you write. That’s what makes your poetry so dynamic and lyrical. I'll love your work for all time. Just plain beautiful!

[?]

absolutley beautiful
Love that last stanza

[Aidz]

Lovin the format, like others have said helps each line roll of the tongue

Tales of luv as only Neva can

[Kenneth The Poet]

Very cool. Reminds me of being by the sea.

[Judy Ponceby]

Lovely Neva. Beautiful images. The words flow right over you. :)

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

The second stanza was brilliant, as well with the whole piece. I loved the scheme and plot. The imagery and descriptions where beauteous. Wonderful, wonderful job!~

[Dream Weaver]

Imaginative and flowed perfectly.
Nice write Neva, I really enjoyed it...

[∂αʌ<..]

your imageries are still amazing Neva and this time your touch of the ocean is just as refreshing!
lovely!

[realmwriter]

Wonderfull as always come from you Neva! This is my favorite line "Those sands of time will unbind the fires
My playmate by the deep" Just love it!

[Mike Winegar]

I love the imagery of the ocean and the ever-changing sea. While the sea and the beach may change with the tides, the memory of the moment lives on.