Kiss of A Crimson Poppy

Twirling in aromatic silken bliss............

Last night I sweetly dream't of fragrant flowers
In a changing kaleidoscope a whirl
Twirling as I yielded to their stunning presence
Thrilling as they gently swirled

I twirled and twirled inhaling the freshest heaven
I never knew could possibly exist
Lost inside an unforgettable aromatic world
My senses will never forget

A touch of satin rose petals brushed my cheek
As purple violets tickled my nose
Crimson poppies slipped though my fingers
Gently kissing the tips of my toes

I believe I found heaven in my dream last night
Twirling in an aromatic silken bliss
When I felt the touch on the tips of my toes
Of a crimson poppy's kiss

Author's Note

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Reviews

A beautiful dream to have ! It is very different from your other poetry but it is a very nice change ! It shows you can have a deep, well worded poem but also be carefree and simple; yet, no matter what you write, it comes off as elegant and lovely. Something as peaceful as flowers can make anyone feel uplifted and happy.

[E.V. Black]

"A touch of satin rose petals brushed my cheek
As purple violets tickled my nose
Crimson poppies slipped though my fingers
Gently kissing the tips of my toes"

Oh my God, Neva, you certainly have outdone yourself this time. This is just...so indescribable. Though short, the imagery you weave is so rich and thick. I admire the way you make me believe that the poppies are, too, kissing my own toes. I can imagine the way that they surround me and sway to and fro in the gentle breeze. You made me think of my own poem "Burning Poppies," which also takes place in a field full of beautiful poppies.

Bravo!

[Tate Morgan]

I love the picture seems the air of love has arrived again

[:DI laugh too much:D]

This was so beautiful, and the imagery was great. I could actually feel the flowers againist my skin and I could picture the meadow =]

[Labu]

very sweet. love it :)

[∂αʌ<..]

im sure this poem made loads of people here smile...its exquisite!...you feel like twirling in with the poppies!
beautiful!

[Aidz]

Ahhhhchoooo this was so vivid n real it set off my allergies

[unknown]

Sweet kiss indeed, lovely poem.

[brenda]

aaaaw:) i wish i could have had that dream !:)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

rapture in a prismatic soul's beautiful movements through layers of being~ gorgeous imagery~ liquid fine silk defined moments~

[Muse]

My favorite part was the kiss on the toes by a crimson poppy, very clever, very charming. :)