Sighs strip the cloth away, revealing their tomorrows..............
What began as a trickle moved forward into what can never be forgotten Flying into hearts and souls as faces, with mysteries that unfold Holding one another in winds conveying what they feel Falling to fit inside a claim, heaven must uphold
Hands move through walls of water, beckoning want inside two bodies Moments hold complexities until all thoughts they feel as one Sighs strip the cloth away, revealing their tomorrows Paradise comes in waves, loneliness is undone
Storms of contemplation feel life racing to repeat the steps they know As their fingers dance on unmade plans with places still to go Gentle touches brush the grounds of want and need Forward into now, love’s willingness exposed
Shadows of these days will always linger in their souls leaving colors Surrounding the breezes capturing love’s attention waiting What once began as a trickle cannot be left behind Arms outstretched, love’s river anticipating
This is so beautiful.. It captures the true thoughts and feelings of that bliss that can be shared between to people.. I love the use of the water..it cleanses and replenishes.. heart, mind and soul..xxx Your friend is very lucky and I'm sure loves this and holds it close to her heart...xo
Oh yes! I can hear this being read at a Wedding...or something! Wonderful four stanza love story, your words, as always, carefully considered, fitting together like destiny itself.
Beautiful write, very peaceful and lovely images! I loved this line - "Hands move through walls of water, beckoning want inside two bodies" - which had lovely imagery and interesting word choice. Very sweet write about love. I enjoyed it.
Such a beautiful gift to celebrate your friend's love. Your first line sums it up for me. What began as a trickle moved forward into what can never be forgotten--such is all great love I think. Brava!
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