Sighs strip the cloth away, revealing their tomorrows..............
What began as a trickle moved forward into what can never be forgotten Flying into hearts and souls as faces, with mysteries that unfold Holding one another in winds conveying what they feel Falling to fit inside a claim, heaven must uphold
Hands move through walls of water, beckoning want inside two bodies Moments hold complexities until all thoughts they feel as one Sighs strip the cloth away, revealing their tomorrows Paradise comes in waves, loneliness is undone
Storms of contemplation feel life racing to repeat the steps they know As their fingers dance on unmade plans with places still to go Gentle touches brush the grounds of want and need Forward into now, love’s willingness exposed
Shadows of these days will always linger in their souls leaving colors Surrounding the breezes capturing love’s attention waiting What once began as a trickle cannot be left behind Arms outstretched, love’s river anticipating
This is so beautiful.. It captures the true thoughts and feelings of that bliss that can be shared between to people.. I love the use of the water..it cleanses and replenishes.. heart, mind and soul..xxx Your friend is very lucky and I'm sure loves this and holds it close to her heart...xo
This Poem is exquisitely beautiful. Each Stanza ties in to the next telling of the love that two people have for each other,and how each one is there for the other. The love of one for the other overcoming all obstacles. What true love is supposed to mean
My favorite part of this poem is that you take something as common as water and use it to show the connection between lovers. Excellent, truly excellent talent you have.
You know, it's amazing how stretchable (had another word in mind, but couldn't remember it) love is to accept things. Even if something might shatter it, or even potentially mar it, love accepts all of the consequences. We write about its strengths and its weaknesses because we are fascinated by how it still goes on through life and time the same as it always is. It is an amazing thing, and you, Neva, captured how fragile yet willing love can truly be.
Not only are you fantastic as speaking for love but you're also amazing at untangling it for others and formatting it in a way that as beautiful as the moments you capture within you ink. Well done :)
Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia.
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