When the night lingers seeking acknowledgement that it has unlocked your soul.......
When the night has lingered and danced over waters close to your words, do you wish to scream out to the very heart of the Milky Way? Do you set foot in the places where youth looks back at its end, or find yourself asking about tomorrow’s words while spinning wheels of fire that torment your days?
Do you sometimes find yourself bound in a shower of eager shouts that sail by chance into nowhere’s crown, not knowing if the sun or moon speaks to your blood in praises of those sounds.
When you find you cannot sleep because your senses have forgotten how the earth and sky watches over the ones that you love, shielding them in the armor of your heart. This is when a sea of words becomes a ghost predestined to help you see your way out.
Perhaps, if you persuaded your now, to dance over waters close to your words, you would not want to fall asleep, but have that ghost sit beside your bed and sing awhile. You might find the courage to expose your soul has passed.
When the night lingers seeking acknowledgement that it has unlocked your soul, look out the window of your roaring mind. Listen for the silence. It has a rhythm that will drown every syllable you see. Silence is the ghost that will sing your words to sleep.
On those nights when you can't shut your mind off and you want to write everything you hold inside, let silence sing your words to sleep.........but only if you want too.......
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What a beautiful, caring poem to share. Such comfort for all who are troubled or can't sleep (I am very familiar with insomnia)
Your words are so comforting, reassurring, hopeful and filled with compassion and sensitivity. I'm making a copy of this to post on my wall
Silencing the mind they say is just before dawn when there’s a moment of complete silence where both the last singers of the night and the first of the day stop, as though holding their breath, waiting to see if the sun will indeed come again. I’ve gotten up early sometimes, just to hear that silence.
Neva...I am blesses to read your gloriously toned work, I find it comforting and liberating :)
This is stunning as always! Those nights are familiar to all, great work love xx
Silence can truly be deafening... for it is the time when your mind seems to be its busiest like a New york City minute... a beautiful and poignant poem
This has an unearthly feel to it almost as if story is being told by something other than a human. The details are fine and allow me to picture the scenes as they unfold. This is my favorite stanza
Perhaps, if you persuaded your now,
to dance over waters
close to your words,
you would not want to fall asleep,
but have that ghost sit beside your bed
and sing awhile.
You might find the courage
to expose your soul
has passed.
So lovely. You never cease to amaze me. The breadth of emotion so clear on the surface also runs deep. Thank you! (the following was my favorite part)
Perhaps, if you persuaded your now,
to dance over waters
close to your words,
you would not want to fall asleep,
but have that ghost sit beside your bed
and sing awhile.
You might find the courage
to expose your soul
has passed.
What a beautiful, caring poem to share. Such comfort for all who are troubled or can't sleep (I am very familiar with insomnia)
Your words are so comforting, reassurring, hopeful and filled with compassion and sensitivity. I'm making a copy of this to post on my wall
Silencing the mind they say is just before dawn when there’s a moment of complete silence where both the last singers of the night and the first of the day stop, as though holding their breath, waiting to see if the sun will indeed come again. I’ve gotten up early sometimes, just to hear that silence.
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