Moved As I Remember

My breath hung on the faintest touch,
loving deeply and unashamed.
I gave my soul's secrets to a heart glowing
with a desire to see the gentleness of life
through an obsidian whisper of glass.
A heart that savored heights of happiness
within vibrating rings issued from a sword's blade.

I deeply treasured my appointment within the circular maze of this love
while simultaneously reading the prints
that it left upon my soul.
They were the color my mind dreamed in,
wondrously prompting warm flames for me to fall into.

Phrases walked into places never been before, curving their fingers
around the notes that played the tune of my emotions,
then danced upon pure clouds of captivation.
Unknowingly they created a celestial answer
for these eyes filled with grief.

I am moved as I remember waiting for my skin to be touched
in places where alone had marked complaints
here and there upon my hours.
When ribbons of truth gave passage
my mouth unfolded in a smile that connected
passionately with your own.

Author's Note

Artist - Xie Yu Chu - http://www.jiyougallery.com/Summer-Rose-p14519.html

Reviews

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

What an extremely touching and moving piece. I love when I can relate to the piece and feel the emotions within the write. This one touched me deep..I am moved as I remember waiting for my skin to be touched in places where alone had marked complaints here and there upon my hours. Oh how I can relate to these words. As always Neva wonderful work with your magical pen...
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[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow you really know how to bring picture to life with your words...

I am moved as I remember waiting for my skin to be touched
in places where alone had marked complaints
here and there upon my hours.

That is what i call deep desires boiling up... a beautifully magical poem.

[SpokenWord]

Dear love Goddess who's finger plays in the ink of spiritual and earthly bliss. You can see love in ways that other dream about how it connects us from within and how it raises us up from under the flames of lust and desire finding within it a higher calling and meaning to digest into our soul.

One has to think and wonder why you aren't happily married and sinking your self in loves divine grip of imagination that comes true through the touch of life with another who feels so deeply as you. If the world could for only a moment see love in the colors that you do we would have peace between women and men and there would be equality in reality and not just in thought or gestures given as trinkets.

You are amazing when you share with us your spirit and you look at loves beauty like no other I have ever known!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

A heart that savored heights of happiness within vibrating rings issued from a sword's blade. To clarify this for some........my meaning here is one who is happy even through fight and turmoil.

[Larry Dyson]

within vibrating( rings) issued from a sword's blade.
?echoing rings of steel?

[Audrey Howitt]

These words speak volumes and resonate on such a deep level.

Phrases walked into places never been before, curving their fingers
around the notes that played the tune of my emotions,
then danced upon pure clouds of captivation.
Unknowingly they created a celestial answer
for these eyes filled with grief.

Brava!

[Arthur Henn]

Neva - First and foremost. I love the photo you used for this beautiful canvas of painted words that I'm sure will capture all living souls.

I would have to say, of all your written word I have read - This is my favourite.

Thank You!

[Rene Velez]

loving, great words Neva, your good with this style, an eye opener for sure, you allow words to play upon themselves...

[An owl on the moon]

Such a beautiful, moving imagery of longing and love awakened... moving over you and within you... The colors and shades of life sing over the reader.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Exquisite writing, your style is amazing :)