Painting in Colors of Love

Let me cradle your body in a promise that tumbles over the moon
When your life tends to be surrounded by a deep stillness
That leaves you wondering if you even know your destination
Or if calm waters your heart will find, or wander aimless

Let my words seep into the soil of your spirit as flaming arrows
Floating into your fears and so quickly piercing your skin
Until you can look at me and not be divided within your soul
Or be consumed by the places where emptiness begins

Let me ignite your dreams under a blanket of whirling passion
Sway your heart with eyes that paint in colors of love
So you will not remember this deep stillness that surrounds
Aimlessly wandering within your thoughts held thereof

Come and rest on the rock of memories forgotten long passed
While we look into the wilderness of each others soul
Until you can look at me and know we are not to be divided
Dive into these calm waters of mine and become whole

Author's Note

Artist: Christiane Vleugels - http://www.liveinternet.ru/community/3180911/post121210605/

Reviews

[kdpgrahi]

Signifies a great love I feel. Third stanza, "Let me ignite your dreams under a blanket of whirling passion
Sway your heart with eyes that paint in colors of love
So you will not remember this deep stillness that surrounds
Aimlessly wandering within your thoughts held thereof." so magnificent.

I liked it and digested it to my heart.

[Maya Storm]

So poetic... "Let me cradle your body in a promise" ..."Let me ignite your dreams under a blanket of whirling passion" I very much enjoyed reading does two lines particularly... This piece is so elegantly put together.

[Lily Mae]

"Let me ignite your dreams under a blanket of whirling passion
Sway your heart with eyes that paint in colors of love"
Perfect... I couldn't have said it better..xx

[Rene Velez]

beautiful and uplifting, soul singing, Your poem is lovely

[VelvetRosetta]

Your writing is always enchanting Neva, the first line here is stunning!
Lovely Piece of work Poetess!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A most guarded and mystical piece neva, well written and guided the reader to the hights of the emotion and imagery, well done, good read.

[David W Moore III]

love the first line! I'd say it is quite poetic, but that's a bit silly! And the last stanza wraps it up fantastically? On a side note, how do your poems get on stumbleupon?

[Audrey Howitt]

From the promise to the fulfillment of love. Wonderfully tender and deep. The way love should be.