Disguise of An Inferno

My dreams burst slowly into entities that wake the sands of time

On those nights when I meet intricately woven memories

I find admiration inside of a shameless delicate need

Upon a shrine created by gentle eyes to please

I never knew an inferno could be disguised in the sweetest music

Entwined within the pleasant taste of a foreign darkness

Full of such wonder that walks alone and unplanned

Leaving me with no escape or want of release

Have I been shrouded in a pretentious cloud of helpless feelings

Where I sweetly drown in your conquering ocean of bliss 

Softly tossed by symphonic waves of your voice

That sings into my delicate need of your kiss

Yet, no metallic notes burst into my dreams or this song I hear

I am not denied in the unfolding of your unearthly wings

Enter into this room where I now dream of you 

My inferno of memories I kiss as I sing

Author's Note

*Artist Arian http://www.lovesemporium.com/catalog.php?cid=133

For the Creative Poetry Group using the words: burst, inferno, pretentious, symphonic, metallic (which I hate) and unearthly

Reviews

[Tom Benson]

I was torn whilst reading this piece Neva. At one point I thought of it in terms of two lovers, then there was an undercurrent that it was more of a spiritual meaning and intended for a higher place. Interesting use of the nominated words and well composed.

[unknown]

Interesting take as i always think of fire when i hear the word inferno, but you made it very nice with it being "disguised in the sweetest music".

[Muse]

Being a dark morbid romantic at heart, I loved every word and image you captured in this poem. To be so vulnerable to an unearthly love is better left in a girls dream. :)

[Aidz]

Kewl line Yet, no metallic notes burst into my dreams or this song I hear

A nice write Neva, covered all the bases methinks :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

You've used the words so well to create a deep moving poem:)

[Richielee]

smart work Neva,you weaved the words into your tapestry of poetry very nicely

[∂αʌ<..]

completely agree with EMF!
its perfect!

[EMF]

How can you comment on something that works perfectly, apart from say it is just that.

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

Very beautiful, moving and touching Neva as always. Even if you had to use words you hate.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Nice work, Neva. You scored with this one even you disliked the metallic part of the prose.

[Poetic Beauty]

this is a beautiful poem of yearning to be close to someone you love. Of dreaming of that touch that keeps you warm inside. I enjoyed this piece.