Disguise of An Inferno

My dreams burst slowly into entities that wake the sands of time

On those nights when I meet intricately woven memories

I find admiration inside of a shameless delicate need

Upon a shrine created by gentle eyes to please

I never knew an inferno could be disguised in the sweetest music

Entwined within the pleasant taste of a foreign darkness

Full of such wonder that walks alone and unplanned

Leaving me with no escape or want of release

Have I been shrouded in a pretentious cloud of helpless feelings

Where I sweetly drown in your conquering ocean of bliss 

Softly tossed by symphonic waves of your voice

That sings into my delicate need of your kiss

Yet, no metallic notes burst into my dreams or this song I hear

I am not denied in the unfolding of your unearthly wings

Enter into this room where I now dream of you 

My inferno of memories I kiss as I sing

Author's Note

*Artist Arian http://www.lovesemporium.com/catalog.php?cid=133

For the Creative Poetry Group using the words: burst, inferno, pretentious, symphonic, metallic (which I hate) and unearthly

Reviews

[Tom Benson]

I was torn whilst reading this piece Neva. At one point I thought of it in terms of two lovers, then there was an undercurrent that it was more of a spiritual meaning and intended for a higher place. Interesting use of the nominated words and well composed.

[FallenWingz]

The flow was flowing like a water flow, amazing imagery coming across with a sensual emotion.

[joshua deathdealer]

I love the write. Lol Agreed with your note.

[OT]

so, so good - i loved - "I never knew an inferno could be disguised in the sweetest music" and that last stanza - woah - too good - "metallic notes burst into my dreams" - brilliantly descriptive! nice!

[Ladysue]

I never knew an inferno could be disguised in the sweetest music...love love this line as I do that last line...a very moving piece...just beautiful...

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

The flow here in this work has a music like a stream...contented sound of water in motion. Nice working of the required words. Metallic fit very nicely!

Excellente!

[Rene Velez]

It came out great, very nice wordplay even if you don't like the words...LOL, awesome

[Jeremy Baker]

Excellent work! These were difficult words yet you have put them work for you magnificaently!

[FamaSemperVivat]

Once again you've penned a beautiful story unleashed a feeling of wantonness within my soul. Beautiful.

[Judas Hammer]

Yet, no metallic notes burst into my dreams or this song I hear, I really like this line....very nice

[TJ]

The images you can inspire in ones mind are far more vivid and far more full and substantial than any picture I have ever seen. Not only that but there's is a story in your work that you tell through your beautiful and rhythmic words.
Excellent work!