Tasting Peace as Flowers

Surely now the clouds are reaching up to angelic prayers
For an alibi that will return their peaceful grace
In hope tomorrow's arms will be a saving reservoir 
To reverse all the battles fought in this place

The layers of heaven remember echoes of glorious love
In streaming colors which cannot be erased
Even as clouds were weeping with every heartbeat
For precious moments not to be replaced

If reaching clouds peered inside the golden rays of sun
For sweet words to warm tomorrow's hours 
Would hearts made of stone awaken beating soft
To taste peaceful dew of grace as flowers

Surely now the clouds are reaching up in appreciation
For sanctuary found in the arms of reprieve
Perhaps if we too reach inside golden rays of sun
This coldness in our hearts, would leave

Author's Note

Didn't know what else to do today but write.........we couldn't read each other. I missed everyone! I actually found this picture AFTER I wrote the poem, some things are just meant to be.

Surreal Art of Vladimir Kush he is so awesome

Reviews

[Veronica Chandler]

"Surely now the clouds are reaching up in appreciation For santuary found in the arms of reprieve Perhaps if we too reach inside golden rays of sun This coldness in our hearts, would leave." Your words in this piece enfold my spirit and comfort me in a way that defies description.

[Muse]

Sometimes words inspire the picture, and visa versa. That is the cool thing about art. You can feed off what ever inspiration you might have, and continue to create from it. And you do this very thing so very very well!

[Dream Weaver]

An impressive brushing of pastel
art, only in words that paint
this exquisite piece of poetic
splender.

[Poetic-Theorem]

Beautiful poetry, wonderful flow and the rhyme keeps it flowing so very well, I love the tone, the soft images are wonderfully painted in words. Excellent work my friend. *hug* David

[EMF]

A beautifully haunting piece. Faint anticipation of what once was I love it. Wonderful flow.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A transformation and guided thought, well done

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Why does it seem that negativity influneces more people than positive forces... it is an ongoing mystery. Your poek for me touches on that subject.

[Rene Velez]

the flow is awesome and so is the rhyme scheme, good work Neva

[Lily Mae]

Love it Neva.. I know I missed being on today also.. But it was a beautiful day for a drive in the country:) xx

[joshua deathdealer]

A lovely write. I know right lol, I didn't know what to do with myself when I couldn't get on this morning.

[FamaSemperVivat]

This is beautiful! A gentle communication of nature, you've captured the picture prompt you've used well.