When Life Began to Dance

When life began to dance and tell the names of me and you
Heaven was met at the threshold of blessings
A waterfall of souls beat an eternal tune that was given
On the beautiful eve of our love’s confession

A seed began growing as a reminder of passion’s flame
Thankful incense smiled, quietly burned
Our line of sight passed into a mist filled with love
Few have ever felt, but for, deeply yearn

Into the air shapes of thought became as tender voices
Deeply settling into our hearts forevermore
They whispered into the dance of life with a pleasure
That sweetly opened the reasons we are for

Whirls of wonder welcomed a constant round of forever
The stars knew our hands must be joined
And we were led to sing the verses of a lovely song
A melody, only heaven could have coined

Reviews

[☯]

A romantic and passionate piece.
"A waterfall of souls beat an eternal tune that was given
On the beautiful eve of our love’s confession"
I really liked the sing-song type of feel it gave and the soothe flow. The title says it all. Amazing write :)

[Rene Velez]

beautiful poem with a beautiful word structure, a dance of two loves joined as one, very nice Neva...

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

As always a beautiful arrangment of words. Your words are always filled with such amazing sentiment and sweet love. I just love the last stanza. You have such a wonderous and magical pen Neva, never lose it. xo

[Michael X]

Such words sing a romantic melody that flows from the depth of poetic expression and the beauty is in each note, wonderfully done Neva,
your talent rings true, endearing

[Veronica Chandler]

Just stunning and emotive so very sweetly penned; another master work Neva!

[Lily Mae]

The beautiful blending of two souls into one.. I love it...xx

[Enigma]

Wow. Superb! :D

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Beautiful imagery, it wafts along the ocean with a beautiful sunset.

[Dream Weaver]

A beautiful carpet ride above and
beyond emotive poetic...xx

[brenda]

i love how you compare and how you use beauitful mataphors !! i love this!!:)

[Christie Moses]

this is such a magical journey with an abundance of soul and love. Really lovely, and lyrical write.