When Life Began to Dance

When life began to dance and tell the names of me and you
Heaven was met at the threshold of blessings
A waterfall of souls beat an eternal tune that was given
On the beautiful eve of our love’s confession

A seed began growing as a reminder of passion’s flame
Thankful incense smiled, quietly burned
Our line of sight passed into a mist filled with love
Few have ever felt, but for, deeply yearn

Into the air shapes of thought became as tender voices
Deeply settling into our hearts forevermore
They whispered into the dance of life with a pleasure
That sweetly opened the reasons we are for

Whirls of wonder welcomed a constant round of forever
The stars knew our hands must be joined
And we were led to sing the verses of a lovely song
A melody, only heaven could have coined

Reviews

[☯]

A romantic and passionate piece.
"A waterfall of souls beat an eternal tune that was given
On the beautiful eve of our love’s confession"
I really liked the sing-song type of feel it gave and the soothe flow. The title says it all. Amazing write :)

[Audrey Howitt]

Your work is so wonderfully romantic. Your words flow so well. I love reading your work!

[E.V. Black]

So beautiful! You tell this so wonderfully.

[WordNerd]

Love it very romantic and the imagery is awesome =]

[unknown]

Heaven has the best tunes :)

[Allen Smuckler]

I love every descriptive line...
With awe, I read you, Neva
...because you never miss a beat
Your use of metaphors is unsurpassed.....period.
allen

[silentpoet]

lovely!

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You're extremely passionate and visionary. It's a unique blend that births such beauty. "Few have ever felt, but for, deeply yearn" is a classic line. It pretty much sums up life if you think about it. Nice piece :)

[Joel M Frye]

Only the most profound souls find the love of which you speak.

Very nice poem. Pulled me in. Very sensual and dripping with feeling.

[Clay Feet]

Your love song is so beautifully expressed with lilting voice stirred to passion. Sweet harmony in this starlit melody.

Beautiful, as always, Neva.